Gracie

@daeus You picked the thing that I really don’t want to do, but the thing that a really, really need to do… Ummm… Thanks. 😀

@That_Writer_Girl_99 sounds like a plan.

Ahhh… you can do it. 😉

@daeus Awww.
*sigh*
Okay. I guess I’ll…mmmm….which should I do, you tell me cause I can’t decide.
1. Write in my novel
2. Write something else
3. Edit finished book
4. Story planning

@daeus Okay. I’ll spend that time doing some procrastinating. Tag me when you’re back. 😀

@daeus Wait for me!

@kate-flournoy If I think of anything while I’m gone, I’ll comment it here and you can tell me if it’s a good idea or it.

Can you tell I’m a bit overwhelmed lol? I have no idea what to do next. No idea where to go…what to do…

I’m signing off. @daeus

@winter-rose *highfives back*

I’m here too! @daeus @winter-rose

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Aw, really? I’m glad to hear that. 😀 My pleasure.

@Cloudy just want to let you know I haven’t abandoned you; I’m going through the story bit by bit and formulating thoughts and such. 😉

Pause. I have to do the dishes, cause I’m home now, and then if we’re on can we move this to the actual google doc in itself? @kate-flournoy

@That_Writer_Girl_99 meh. Logic. Who cares about logic? 😛

Forget the logic for a sec. What is the most natural emotional course for the characters? Go wild. Not even kidding.
And one question that might give you some answers— what is the Warden going to do with Blake? What are they saying/doing, locked up in that office together?

Also… @emma-flournoy Thank you so much for going through Prison the way you are. It’s really helping me!

You’re my brainstorming buddy. You’re always helping. @kate-flournoy

I feel like the logical move is to decide…the logical move for my characters. Kara and Blake head back to their cells, but now Kara knows that Blake has a lot of secrets. Matthias, the instigator, is in solitary and is rather incapable of doing anything at the moment…so…[Read more]

*pulls out sword pen and sticks it behind her ear* How can I help?

@That_Writer_Girl_99

*sigh* Yes. Emotions. Fickle things, hard for me to write. I’ll get better at it eventually.

I don’t have any ideas for chapter 7. None. My brain is empty except for one thing that doesn’t even relate to the seventh chapter and I don’t know if I’ll even use it yet. @kate-flournoy

Oooooh, I like it!

There is one thing that could use tweaking though. Both Kara and Matthias seem a little scattered and unfocused as to their emotional state. Now they’re supposed to be; I know. They’re both confused. But the reader shouldn’t be. It’s not that both of them shouldn’t be struggling with several different emotions at once, but that…[Read more]

@that_writer_Girl_99 Have fun! And yes, I am impressed anyway. I can hardly sing, though I’m trying to learn.
@winter-rose *raises hands* I plead not guilty!
I’d love to stay longer, but I’ve to eat and get ready for guitar lessons.