Gracie

Hello AAlison-grace, welcome! I hope you feel at home here! Yeah, fantasy! Woop woop! Ohio! My family started there, and my great-grandma still lives in Lima. 2 questions:
1. Do you go for Ohio State (hehehe)
2. What is Y-dubbing?

Hello Alison, welcome! I hope you feel at home here! Yeah, fantasy! Woop woop! Ohio! My family started there, and my great-grandma still lives in Lima. 2 questions:
1. Do you go for Ohio State (hehehe)
2. What is Y-dubbing?

@cloudy Hi! I’m beta-reading.

Hey @dragon-snapper I’m free. 🙂

Hey @draggon-snapper I’m free. 🙂

Thanks @kate-flournoy, don’t worry, late critique is better than none. 🙂

@daeus @ethryndal @bethanysinkyroses @winter-rose I’m here for about an hour. I promise I won’t melt anyone’s chairs. 😛

@daeus @ethryndal @bethanysinkyroses @winter-rose I’m here for about an hour. I promise I won’t melt anyone’s chairs. My villain is probably doing that for me. 😛

@Allison-grace Just a heads up, Josiah’s tag is actually @aratrea –if you look at his profile, you can find his tag. The same’s true for me– my tag is @that_writer_girl_99 (quite a mouthful, I know) but my username is just Elizabeth. Kinda confusing, but that’s how it works.

@Cloudy sorry I’ve been so long getting back! 😛 What @GracieGirl said; also in some places I felt that you jumped too quickly from deep, in the moment scenes to hurried overviews. To fix that, you should probably make lines for scene breaks, and make your deep in the moment scenes even deeper, while your overviews can either be shortened, or…[Read more]

@emily-d @perfectfifths Well, the biggest slang I can think of is “ya’ll”, but that’s more of a southern thing. Otherwise, I can’t really think of any either. Really, there are a bunch of different regional accents. Northern, Southern, and Californian.

It’s been missing for a while, actually. 😛

Thanks. Really have no idea how I missed this.

@Daeus

@graciegirl Alright! Read you around!
I wrote 1020.

DAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! *rushes in and falls on the floor in a weepy mess* HOW DID I MISS THIS??? Is it still open? Can I still reserve a slot? Please??? *begs you from her knees*

@Daeus

@winter-rose *staggers* Oh my goodness!!! Ladies and gentlemen, the only word I can think of to describe this is WOW!

@daeus Adios!
@graciegirl I’m still going.

@Winter-Rose One little tip about breaking from your WIP…I took a several-month unintentional hiatus from my book, and when I came back to it, I couldn’t remember half of the things I was going to change to make it better. Certain spots I was going to add a bit of dialogue, or a symbolic moment, or whatever, but it had been so long that I forgot…[Read more]

@GracieGirl Aw, the poor little thing. I will pray. My family has two beloved cats, and I can only imagine how we’d feel if either of them was having an issue.

@LifeOfKatie Coolio! I was just poking around on it—Looks pretty good. 🙂

@graciegirl @daeus I’ll be working on my WIP.