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Snapper replied to the topic A Prison Problem… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@that_writer_Girl_99 Wow…I’m sure what everyone else has said is good meats. Listen to them. Though I am curious as to what you will do in the end. Let me know, por favor.
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Snapper replied to the topic Smooth/Effective Dialogue in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@gh24682468999 Woah…nice long tag. 😛
Well…I’m not quite sure how to help you here–dialogue has usually been natural for me. I learned mostly by observation in reading. Some books have some really good dialogue, and somehow, when I was ten, managed to soak that up.
So I guess what I’m saying here is that definitely observing what other…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic A Prison Problem… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 They gave you good answers. O.O
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Of Names in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper I LOVE NAMES. I NAME EVERYTHING.
*coughs*
With that crucial bit of random information out of the way, I’d tend to agree with you. The best fantasy names are those that don’t look so absolutely foreign they’re impossible to relate to. The name should describe your character, not overshadow him. Personally I love old Norse, Saxon,…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Prison Problem… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus eeeeeh… no pressure. 😛
@That_writer_Girl_99 good question though. I think… it seems to me that you’re asking not just about the Warden, but about the moral balance of justice and mercy. How do you show the necessity of justice (bad actions have painful consequences) while balancing it with understanding and forgiveness (we’re all…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Smooth/Effective Dialogue in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@gh24682468999 what they said. 😉
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katie replied to the topic Hello, Kingdom Writers! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
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Mariposa Aristeo replied to the topic Hello, Kingdom Writers! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@lifeofkatie You’ve been to Disney World? 😮
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katie replied to the topic Hello, Kingdom Writers! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@livylyn- welcome to the Kingdom! It’s great to have you here!
How neat you play guitar! I play too. What do you blog about?
what’s your favorite section at Disney?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Books of Leifer! (My trilogy needs help) in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
No worries. I’ve gotten several chapters into a story before realizing that I needed to change the perspective. If that’s what you think is best, than I say go for it!
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Jessi Rae replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 11 months ago
@salome01w4g I imagine one also has to have an eye for color (which I’m pretty sure I don’t have :P). Maybe I’ll try to make a collage sometime, though.
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Kina Lamb and
LivyLynn are now friends 8 years, 11 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
This doesn’t have to do with being a writer, but the problems I have as a writer when I have a writer fail moment.
ME: What color hair does this character have?
SIBLING: I don’t know. Depending on the scene, it varies from black to blonde.XD I’ve never had a character who can change hair color from scene to scene.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@epicaddie2 Byeeeeeeeeeee!! XD
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
eesh. I only recently learned what a character arc was, and I’m still trying to figure out how to write one. @epicaddie2 But what @dragon-snapper said is right. We’re people, constantly learning what’s right and wrong, just like our characters. If you strive to portray that accurately, then I’m not sure you can restrict an arc to any length.…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@epicaddie2 Not from what I know of. If you’re worried that the character arc isn’t going to fit in your book, then I’d shorten it, but the characters is what carries your story. The character arc should not be immediate or too small. Character arcs can last for a few books maybe too, if its a major life aspect.
But if you think about, our lives…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic A Prison Problem… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Alright @aratrea thanks for replying! I’ll see what I can do…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic A Prison Problem… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
In regards to the Warden’s specific character, I think I agree with you. I guess my problem is with the theme…the way I want the characters to act regarding the Warden heavily relies on what they believe about choosing mercy over revenge, or the reverse–revenge over mercy. I’m not sure how to convey that with regards to the Warden’s character,…[Read more]
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Mariposa Aristeo replied to the topic Hello, Kingdom Writers! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@livylynn Yes, you definitely need to go again. They’ve added a lot of new attractions. However, if you are a Star Wars fan, I recommend postponing your trip until the new Star Wars area is opened in Hollywood Studios (if you can wait that long). 😉 If you ever need any DW tips, let me know, I have loads of them. What are your favorite Disney…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@epicaddie2 Welcome!
@that_writer_Girl_99 Motion Picture class? That sounds like so much fun! I’ve looked into scriptwriting before, and yeah, the format is odd. I find Times Roman much more friendly. 😛 - Load More
