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@gracie-j Lying on my bed. A part of me wants to pick up around my room but it’s such a wreck. I’d probably need to do it piece by piece so I don’t get overwhelmed lol

@gracie-j I’m here. What’s up? I got a new desk and printer for Christmas! So excited. We’re gonna get everything set up in my room next week.

@scoutfinch180

So I got Sally, my first beagle about 2 or 3 years back. Then we got Jack her companion, and they had pups! We kept 2 pups and got rid of dad, and then later got rid of one of the pups.

(my parents and brothers have 2 dogs. One is one of Sally’s babies)

So now I have 2 fur babies who I adore!! My sally and her Daughter (who was p…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Haven’t really worked on it. Just been giving myself some time away because I haven’t felt like working on it and I know I’m gonna wanna hit the ground running in January.

And my beagles are good! That day I said we were bringing them in we had a scare with Sally, our first beagle (and momma to our other one Raven). She got a pie…[Read more]

@gracie-j I’m here but haven’t been doing any writing or editing. Holidays and all.

@kathleenramm

Yea I struggle with scenes that have multiple characters. Not even just with dialogue but overall, I struggle with not just randomly popping in things for them to do to remind u they’re there, but I also usually don’t feel like taking the time to write the scenes lol. Again, hopefully I’ll smooth it out in editing.

@nova21 Yes I do kinda imagine her in that way. I need to definitely take a look at that more later probably, but I also think it’s hard for her to do so when actually speaking to The Destroyer.

But I definitely know where you’re coming from because that is how I’d like to depict her. She tries to remain very stoic on the outside, but when speak…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Im just gonna use what I’m working on rn…and since I’m still in the first few chapters, probably the scenes in chapter 4.

I’m honestly struggling to write scenes with my MC’s family, because there are 4 members and sometimes I get overloaded with too many ppl cuz I don’t want to just throw in conversation just so they can be in…[Read more]

@gracie-j Thank you 😊 So if nothing changes we’re bringing my pups in!! I’m so so happy!! We haven’t had them in since last week. We usually have them in once every week, but it was looking like we weren’t gonna get them in till next weekend, but now we might be bringing them inside!!!

I LOVE MY BEAGLE BABIES!!!

@writerlexi1216 Nice! I’ve wanted to be able to go somewhere and sit and write or edit, but don’t really get the chance too often. I’m gonna be getting some Starbucks later tho (which I’ll have to reheat because it’s being brought to me)

@gracie-j wow! Okay, thanks!! That makes me happy lol! Once I edit my chapter 1 to the best I may put it on here As well and then that’ll probably be it for now. I think the prologue turned out good but I would later like feedback on chapter 1, just because I’m not sure if it’s gonna be as well done. Hopefully it will be, and if it is then I don’t…[Read more]

@gracie-j Sooo did no one have any critiques on my prologue or does no one want to share them….? 😆

@gracie-j chapter 1. But there’s a livestream by an author tuber named Sara Lubratt and 3 my time (may be a different time for others) so I’m gonna join that and see if it’ll help me get to work lol.

Maybe if u have time u can join.

@gracie-j I’m here! Gotta do some of my devotion time, but I really should probably get some editing done today…..sigh lol

@gracie-j @devastate-lasting @wroterlexi1216 @rmarcher @scoutfinch180 Anyone on today?

@gracie-j Yea I just didn’t care for what I read of their publish rules or whatever and would prefer just posting on here.

If y’all have any critiques that’d be great lol

@scoutfinch180 Yes she does and while they do meet, my MC still doesn’t truly know who she is. I don’t think I’m gonna have them really meet face to face until book 3. They’ll meet, but only for seconds at a time or in Corvina’s other form (she’s a shapeshifter)

@scoutfinch180

Thank you so much! So in this first one she’s not quite as prevalent, but I needed this prologue to really begin the story and so when u do finally see her or realize who she is you’ll already know and be connected to her. As the series progresses she’s going to get more and more scenes, but in this first one she not quite as preva…[Read more]

@gracie-j @devastate-lasting @rmarcher @kathleenramm @lewilliams @writerlexi1216

I will be posting my prologue on the KP forum for critiques!! Just letting y’all know!!