@godlyfantasy12
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Yeah he met Seb, but they didn’t strike it very well XD Seb is on his way tho
Marcel
Marcel watched Pax look around for a second, then raised a shaky finger. “Turn around.’
Pax did so, shivering at what hapened next. The Guardian kid traced his back along the collar, just enough to feel the bandage underneath.
“O-Okay… now…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 9 months, 2 weeks ago
You live in a good area for wildlife?
Oh wow, I bet you look super cool on a sand bike. I know I would. *flips hair* Is it normal to have a bike where you come from or are you privileged?
Ooh, I can’t sew 😖 But that’s awesome! …Has Nyx ever had to wear a costume?
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Hiiiii, small child!!
Marcel
The blankets were so thick and warm, orange and yellow like melted sorbet. The softness breathed over him, urging sleep.
Two exhausting days in a row; no wonder Marcel didn’t mind drooling a little on the pillow. Was this going to be the norm? Battling everyday bullies and the offhand m…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Fynn and Lukas were chatting with Calvin, and Cal had recently dragged in Chase and Marcel who are now recovering on two of the beds. Marcel is half awake, Chase is unconscious 😀
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RAE replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@scoutfinch180 @jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @godlyfantasy12
This is a section of chapter two i’m finally happy with, so now I’m posting it here so you all ca read it/critique it. enjoy!
“Nahim. Nahim!”
Mandin waved his large hand in front of his 19-year-old friend’s hidden face. Nahim brushed Mandi…
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 9 months, 2 weeks ago
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @rae @godlyfantasy12
Fynn
“Oh yeah.” Fynn gave a chin-up gesture. “She’s great. She puts up with me all day.” He let his gaze slowly drift to Lukas.
Lukas’s cheeks didn’t flush this time. He smiled. “Me too. Expect I’m much easier to deal with than this goof.” He elbowed Fynn in the side.
Fynn contained his surprise in a small…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 9 months, 2 weeks ago
QuEsTiOnS I have genuinely wondered.
Easton, what kind of person are you in a friend group?
Lois, tell me all your feeling concerning Felicity and don’t skimp on the details.
Chase, if you could change into a baby polar bear or a penguin for the rest of your life, which would you be?
Livia, hav…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae
Hugo
Hugo watched the interaction with mild amusement. “It’s strange, to have your brother watching us.”
“Sorry.” Nar ducked her head. “I just don’t think he would have it any other way.”
“I don’t mind.” A memory struck, and he chuckled. “I once dated a girl while her assassin family standing around the table, judging my every move.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @rae @godlyfantasy12
Fynn
“Yeesh. Life’s never dull at this school.” He rolled his eyes. “And you must be the mom in their little friend group, am I right?”
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@esther-c @rae @godlyfantasy12
Calvin
“That’s our resident Cloud Boy, Marcel. Um… they’re bad at dancing?” Calvin grinned lamely. “Bad enough to faint from physical distress?”
Fynn raised an eyebrow.
“Yeah, I didn’t think that excuse would work either. They got hurt in a fight. Again.”
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @rae (almost tagged you @chase 🤣)
Fynn
“Oh, hi! …Fynn, Lukas, Paxton. Just got back from dance class.” The boy brushed a strand of blue-tinted hair off his forehead.
“Some dance class,” Fynn muttered.
“Is that Chase?” Lukas pointed to one of the boys on the bed.
“Oh, yeah.”
“Who’s the kid with the cotton-candy…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m just going to RP Chase coming with my boys, but if anyone else wanted to be on the bus, that’s chill.
@rae @esther-c @godlyfantasy12
Calvin
The ride on the bus was nice and quiet. Chase sat slumped over between the two Baztian boys, still mostly unconscious.
Mars summoned a cloud puff and held it under Chase’s head like a pillow, even tho…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh, oops! You’re fine 🙃
Fynn
Fynn tried to hide his surprise that Paxton had asked a question in a complete sentence. “Um, good. Yeah, I’m going good.” He smiled. Then eyed Lukas. “And I think Lukas is doing fantastic.” His smile grew into a grin.
Lukas glared daggers, but a smile clearly tugged at the corner of his mouth. “Yes…[Read more]
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic How To Write Christian Fantasy-Putting God In The Mix in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@every-one else who commented on here gave such good advice as I’ve struggled with this myself!
I don’t know if it helps but in one WIP I had to set aside for the time being (it was too complex, needed to take a step back to reorganize later), my God-figure was included like you demonstrate, but was treated more as an enigma or…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@LoOpYLin @godlyfantasy12 @rae @anyone else.. I can’t think of anyone
Oki-doki, finally getting around to this.
Lots of fun music! You can listen to these while trying to figure out what ol’ Whaley is writing 😛 Or use them for your own playlists.
I should mention something. Please do not look up the game Little Nightmares II unless you are oka…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic How To Write Christian Fantasy-Putting God In The Mix in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 3 weeks ago
You have some good responses already, which I shall have to think over. Nonetheless…
[Disclaimers: 1) While I am not writing “kid’s stories” I am writing Middle-grade, which is definitely not YA. 2) I am not writing to unbelievers, but rather young people still building their foundations. 3) One major theme in my current series…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Aww, Paxtonnnn!! 🥰🥰
Lukas
Lukas tossed his phone on the bed when they walked in. He opened his mouth to speak to Paxton, but was interrupted by a waterfall of laughter from Fynn.
“What?” Lukas furrrowed his brow. Fynn held Lukas’s phone in his hands, cackling like a hyena. Lukas hurried over and looked at his phone. He was s…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22
Yeah that sounds good. I don’t know November very well, so it’d be cool to get to know them.
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whaley replied to the topic How To Write Christian Fantasy-Putting God In The Mix in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 3 weeks ago
(I almost put @marcel 🤦🏻♀️ ROFL)
Oh my XD I have an imaginary representative at the helm.
I like that about Luna, where it’s subcontext and stuff! Makes sense!!
Good! I have a hard time practicing subtext myself, but that’s okay. We’re learning.
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