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Ooooo!!! I love this section!!!

Ok. Callan is a knave, and that was creepy, but well done. This description of him made me laugh:

Callan’s voice sounded like something that crawled out of a swamp.

And November facing someone he fears to protect Ara was AMAZING. And her Uncle is fantastic. Being a PK myself, I loved his c…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 wow!

so Ara’s family is all in high positions? Her parents are the rulers, her uncle is called a “prophet” so I’m guessing that means he’s their advisor?

@godlyfantasy12 oh, cool! Those are really pretty colors you’ve picked, too.

so one of them dies canonically? Or you’re just saying if one dies the crystal goes dull? Will someone else get it, or will it just never be usable again cause its owner is gone forever? (Unless he or she has a way of coming back.)

@godlyfantasy12 that’s a great message!!

what are the crystals for btw? Are they just like “badges” of some kind, or do they have a deeper meaning?

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*Sniff*

That’s beautiful. I love how realistic his theme is. I wish more books addressed the need to love God first. Knowing God is the deepest, innate need of us humans. But it’s too easy to see that on paper and not draw it out in real life.

What really crushes me about the situation he’s in right now, is that when he sees…[Read more]

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Ok. You about made me cry.

That is so sad. I can see November’s motives so clearly that it’s painful, because it’s just… So true, and yet so, so wrong. Riven is using the truth to tell a lie. And poor, sweet November is caught in the middle. Riven using affection to manipulate November breaks my reader-heart.

I could pound…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 ooh that’s a good scene!

Riven seems to be different than in your previous drafts. He’s a bit more conniving and less “I’m evil cause I can be!”

I’m a bit worried that what he calls “protecting” A’grend doesn’t mean truly protecting it. But maybe he’s telling the truth. I don’t know.

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Ohhh, I’m kind of in a similar position as I’m writing the second draft of a WIP. I’m keeping some scenes, shuffling some around, and adding new ones. It’s been a fun juggling act 🥴😂

I don’t know how much of a plotter you are, but having a big picture idea of your plot is going to be super helpful. You don’t necessarily…[Read more]

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Yay, Godly! So glad you’re back! 😁

@godlyfantasy12 Go for it!!

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Possible (probable) scene for Book #2 of my fantasy series idea🤭

let me know what y’all think👀

The Mercenary camp seemed naught much fond of having guests.

Couldn’t they at the very least be w…

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SHE’S WRITING AGAIN. EEEEEEE🤩🤩🤩

November!!!😭😭 I love the scene! 😭😭 I’ve missed November🥺

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YES?!?!! XD

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yall want me to post another scene?

Yes please!

@godlyfantasy12 heyyyy welcome back!!! Glad you’re back to writing your story. I don’t exactly have the time to give feedback yet, but I will TOTALLY be back tomorrow.

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AHH! Godly is here!

*Hugs*

What do we have here? A November scene?!

*Excited reading*

*Meets this Callan and his cuckoos.*

Who is this creep?

*plots to cause him destruction*

*finishes reading*

Aw, November, it’s not your fault, dearie.

Great section! Grammatically, the writing is rough, but the scenes flows well. Vivid…[Read more]

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*Slowly freaks out*

November scenes!!! She’s writing again!! November! Ara! Ahhhhhhhhhhh-

*Freaking out escalates tenfold*

@godlyfantasy12 Notifs have been really bad, so I’ll notif you here. I messaged you on my profile :]

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I feel like my writing is subpar tbh….but idk sometimes posting it elsewhere helps? idk…I give myself such a hard time. I’m just writing it down, and I have to remind myself that every single second XD

I feel that. We often need to remind ourselves that our writing doesn’t need to be perfect, it just needs to be. At least, that’…[Read more]

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I’m glad to see you writing again! Sometimes it can feel like such a chore. ❤️ But I think it just takes some time. I’ve also been helping Loops (a teensy-weensy bit) and I’ve thought about reading through the whole roleplay. Even if we weren’t the best writers, and we still aren’t, it’s still fun.