@godlyfantasy12
Active 4 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 *sobs* HOW DARE YOU DESTROY MY HAPPY FANTASY!! But I get you – I am killing Kerwin after all….
Ohh!! LOVE IT ALREADY SO MUCH!!
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 XD It’s SO MUCH FUN TO WRITE!! *happy squeal*
@godlyfantasy12 BUT WE WANT TO PROTECT THEM!!!! *pulls up drawbridge* Mwahahaha!!
Cool! So is your story kind of an allegory?
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
I feel like I’m a little too far in my WIP to give snippets w/o being confusing….but I have this little side project going just for the fun of it….it’s not exactly RP format *shrugs* *hopes that’s okay*
(it’s my 2 polar opposites – Verity and Payton – and I smashed them into a story…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Whoa! Thank you for answering my questions. I love those plot twists! They are so sweet…
(I had remembered the “mad” zookeeper, and I was curious to say the least.)
And I get changing it up. It makes a lot of sense, and honestly, is a little more suspenseful this way. (And very like Jocelyn.)
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
XD Kind of? Although at this point he’s about seven years old, so he’s counted a youth and is not a child.
Ah yes, the next scene/part of this scene is from Vulk’s point of view…and just so you know he’s always been a bit of a rascal.
Uh, not exactly. It’s more of the fact Vratislav knows what is going on and that the season o…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koska Aww I love it!! And Heart of Gold – whoa that is GREAT!! <3 All y’all are AMAZING WRITERS!! And leave me wanting more….
@freedomwriter76 YES WE ARE!!Â
never mind that I have no powers whatsoever and that I’ve never handled a weapon in my LIFE XDThey can JOIN HANS!!! 😉@godlyfantasy12 I sense the plot thickening as we…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Oh good. XD Poor Nyx, poor Zlatan, and poor anyone who happens to be stuck with them.
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @queen_of_alvastia
Y’all, I finally got the first scene for Heart of Gold writen!!! I’m totally thrilled…
Sgriss, sgriss, shgrit. The blade slid back against the whetstone, its blue-black blade coated in the fine grit.
Zlatan watched his father’s brow smooth and contract with his work. The o…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Wow. That’s such a good plot twisty thingy! Now I’ve got sooo many questions.
Does she ever learn who her father is? What happened to her cousin? How do Ara and November work into everything? Is she blamed for the murder at any time? I seem to remember you mentioning that something like that happens. Ahhhhhh!
Regains composure…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
XD I was starting to freak out too, especially as I was like How in the world has Nyx and even Lynn missed that!?!
Oohhh dear…
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Uh whoa, that’s…amazingly awful. (What is her uncle’s name?)
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 Love how you tied in the hair color on all those people!! COOL!!!
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 *falls to the floor sobbing* THAT IS SOO TRAGIC I JUST CAN’T EVEN *on the verge of a breakdown* 😭😭😭😭 Oh my word she’s so HAPPY and her past is JUST *wails* 😥😪😭😣😫😯😑🙄😓🙁 *uses every sad emoji out there*
THIS IS SERIOUSLY SOOOO SAAADDDD!!!!!!
*CRIES FOREVER* *CRIES EVEN AS I KIDNAP…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 AHH!! THE CLIFFHANGERS!!! WHY MUST YOU KEEP DOING THIS TO ME!! All right that’s it. Lyn is IN! As in “in the #ProtectionSquad and November is already there…
@freedomwriter76Â STEEEEVVVEE!!! *wails* THAT’S NOT WHO YOU AREEEEEEE!!!!
#MissionTAKE DOWN HYDRA!! And smash them into little pieces and throw them all into slimy…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Suspense?
I am on the edge of my seat…
The different parts are all right, but we need the rest!!!
Ach, Lynnie…
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon thank you! *bows gracefully in my imagination* Don’t even ask how that looked irl XD
@freedomwriter76 BUCKY BOI!! NOOOO!! *sobs brokenheartedly*
@godlyfantasy12 Yeah that makes sense BUT WHAT HAPPENS TO HIM!? *glare* you didn’t answer the question girl!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Hmm…
Slides closer to the wall, hand now gripping knife hilt.
I’m not sure about this…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Ohhhhh, I smell treason…
Squirms in chair before remembering my dignity and clasping my hands.
Is Ridley black haired?
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 *totally* Umm guessing if we kidnap Lyn we will have to take Nyx too?
@godlyfantasy12 I LOVE IT!! I LOVE LYN!! *super hugs Lyn* And why am I starting to get a bad feeling now…
Wait what happened to Ridley? *gulp*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Nearly falls out of chair from leaning too far forward, enraptured by the tale.
Oh! Thank you for telling, what happens next?
*Fingers sunglasses in belt*
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