GodlyFantasy12

@whalekeeper

I am so happy you like them!! ❤ That means a lot to me, because I remember at some point you critiqued my writing, and I was a little self-conscious about the whole thing. So I decided to do better. Thank you for that little push, Min! (And if you have more advice relating to my writing, do not hesitate to wound my pride.)

Lol sorry…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Ok, like 90% or something. It was pretty good but I was younger and it was maybe a little violent for me.. plus I didn’t know what was going on with the spirit that took over a dead guys body at the end. But maybe I’ll try it again sometime lol

@highscribeofaetherium

Ooooops on second thought I did read most of Mistborn lol

@thearcaneaxiom

No, that totally makes sense! I love the ideas from Brandon Sanderson’s books you mentioned, though I haven’t read about any of them. Yes, in my opinion, worldbuilding should start with an idea instead of a formula, but I also think sheets like that are good ways to inspire something if you’re feeling blank, because you can’t…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Great job! I love your descriptions and the style of your writing, it’s really beautiful!

@calyhuge

My apologies. Perhaps Seb warped away before Katonia could say anything? I’ll say that was his canon response. And thank you for the healing jewel. 😉

@godlyfantasy12

We have Paxton, Fynn (I hope I spelled it right XD), Wolfie, Flax, Marc, Seb, and… Lucas! That’s who we forgot.

And I’ll leave starting the next day to you, our…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Dude your writing is just so unique, like the whole image of Marcel and Seb is so clear in my mind 😂 I can’t get enough of your descriptions lol

@godlyfantasy12

Uh Idk about Finn, (doesn’t freedom have a finn?) I have a Flax somewhere in there but he got kinda lost with the chaos 😅

@hybridlore

I really like what you have so far! If I were to include anything else, I would be sure to show what her emotional reaction is to the information in the beginning, so it’s obvious what kind of growth she has gone through. I feel like most people would have one or more of the five stages of grief (denial, anger, bargaining, depression…[Read more]

Wait a sec, I had a bedtime RP ready –

But thanks Godly for the attention – writing these is my reward for finishing my new stressful schedule every day!

– Two Hours Later –

Sebastian

Seb was a simple man, with simple needs.

And those included snuggling up in a blanket, watching silent black and white films, eating three gallons of ice…[Read more]

@loopylin

❤️ I’m glad it’s so fun to read! Thanks Loops!!

@godlyfantasy12

Sounds good to me! Tbh, I don’t know if my charries could survive for much longer 😂

Also GIRL. I seriously thought Marcel would low-key be annoyed with Pax for the entire year – and while yeah, he isn’t exactly happy Pax’s aura in general, at least they’re cool now XDX…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ohh, okay. Maybe I would like it lol.

@loopylin

Yeah! XD Well, Idk if I’ll like it or not, but I’m kind of excited anyway. Thanks! Yeah, definitely. I like art too! And math, kinda. Never done humanities before tho.

@loopylin

Ooh, yeah, that would be fun! Hmm, probably just starting our new co-op in general and seeing what it’s like. But I think Photography and Chemistry will be fun 😉 What were your favorite subjects?

@loopylin

Ohh, okay. Yeah, that’s always easier! I actually just did that too, my family moved away for four years and then we circled back here. What kind of job are you hoping to get?

Oops, yeah, school just started for me. I’m a sophomore this year

@loopylin

Oh awesome! I just moved too xD Are y’all moving out of state? (if you’re comfortable sharing that).

@loopylin

That’s good! Sounds fun lol. Has school started for you yet or are you already graduated?

@mineralizedwritings

Here’s the current version, sorry if it’s a little messy! I was trying to get out my ideas for each scene without worrying too much over wording. Let me know what you think and if you have any ideas!

A few weeks before Christmas, Addison (the main character) finds out that she probably won’t live much longer.
Scene showing i…[Read more]

@acancello

That’s good! Hah, it’s ok, I haven’t been doing great on math either, but I’m always a little rusty after summer vacation. Yep, I am! 😁 It’s been going pretty well!

@loopylin

Pretty good! How are you? xD Yeah I get that.