GodlyFantasy12

@rae

Hugo

Hugo half-hissed, half-laughed, “I’m sure whatever you just said was a good thing, Miss Nar.”

He had practically forgotten his manners in this modern world. For the first time that night, two spots of red glowed on his cheeks.

@savannah_grace2009

That sounds good, I’m glad you were able to get a clear answer from God! I agree, I think it still definitely works even without the shorter beginning. And even if it does turn some readers away, it’s going to touch the people God wants it to. 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

About prologues…I’ve never heard that before! Mine is technically a first chapter, so should I just erase the label of “prologue”?? 😂

You do whatever you want, girl, it’s your story. XD

I had actually never heard that before, but it kind of makes sense. I think some writers also use prologues for info-dumping. I’d rather have…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

💖💖💖

@savannah_grace2009

Ok so in this RP I say Liv has blue eyes, but correct me if I’m wrong. 😂

Lukas

Lukas found he couldn’t take his eyes off Liv’s face. He tried, but somehow, he found himself drowning in the crystalline pool of her blue eyes.

“Aww.” He heard a whisper pass by him. He blinked and looked behind him, only to see Fynn dance awa…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

First of all, I love your writing!!

Second, my actual answer to your question. XD Ok. So I think I prefer the first one better. Though I do have an opinion on prologues… I heard an author (who had been writing since forever) say that he doesn’t like prologues because typically writers use them as a way to draw readers in bef…[Read more]

@loopylin

You got thissssss XDXD I’m on Christmas break and am going nOwhEre so, behold.

@rae

…Everyone does stupid stuff XD BUT I would not call you stupid. You have an innocent track record on here, and that would be unnecessarily villainous of me.

It’s official, Nar has a crush on Hugo already.

OH MYYy that’s so sweet of her!

I just hope he…[Read more]

Me when I can barely walk at school, my classmates ask what’s wrong, and I have to tell them I stretched my muscles too much trying to learn the Charleston:

Babs

“Oh Baaaaaaabs…” The Vinlin’s warm, boyish face turned to her, streaked with dark curls. He tied his coat around his waist and held out his hands. “Come on!”

Babs fussed with her clothes and hair one moment too long, and he pulled her onto the dance floor.

With a squeak, she tried her very best – but what was she supposed to focus on? H…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Of course! Sorry, I think my last post lagged. I really like your idea of doing the flashback and then going to Lilitu’s pov, though!

@grcr @savannah_grace2009

Yeah, I did notice that! Maybe Lilitu’s chapter could come after Sef’s?

@sara

Definitely! I hope you figure it out!

@savannah_grace2009

Hey! I think the first one does a great job of pulling the reader in more, but the second one also has some great writing in it.

I know the chapter with Sef and her mom really means a lot to you, and it does a good job of setting up the backstory of Sef’s parents and a little bit of world building. So really they both work in…[Read more]

The dancing has begun!

Hehehe…

Alright, I’ll write some RPs

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas

Lukas swallowed hard and faced Liv with an uncertain smile wobbling on his lips. “Well?” He held out his arms.

@rae (I said in here that Chase was dancing, but I don’t know what you decided to do)

Callista

She smiled, all tears dried, and met Fynn’s ey…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oh that’s awesome! You can tell her I love her name. 😉

I was trying to choose between Clementine, Maisie, Hallie, and Dixie. It was close between Maisie and Hallie, but Hallie won. 😁

@loopylin

Dante needs someone to dance with!! *glares* He can’t just stand there the whole time. He needs someone to at the very least annoy him.

@rae

Aww, thx, he loves making people happy, it makes him happy 😊

Hugo

The dance was so simple, Hugo could do it with his eyes closed. And he did. Holding Nar’s hands gently, he glided through the steps, and tilted his head up with a blissful smile.

When Nar did a funny spin under one arm, the slender boy laughed and gave her another twirl. H…[Read more]

@everyone

…I’m just going to answer my own question and start the practice 😅😊

@rae

Hugo

“Why should you apologize? Look at that,” Hugo beamed. He rolled down his sleeve and spun his arm like a pinwheel.

Nar slung her satchel around to her opposite shoulder. Her face flushed faintly with confidence.

Hugo looked at her again, checked himself…[Read more]

@everyone do Y’all want me to intro the teachers? Get the practice moving?