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Esther replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 1 month ago
Yeah contacting someone who used to be affiliated with KP might be a good idea. Idk how busy Josiah is, but it’d be great just to know that the site will keep running.
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whaley replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 1 month ago
I just sent another message through the Contact Us page. I checked around for an email and found ‘kingdompenmag@gmail.com.’ I’m not sure if this is the only inbox KP uses, so I’m going to wait for a while before directly using this email instead of Contact Us.
I think the best thing to do right now is to have a backup plan, and try to get…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
You’re totally fine. Thanks! 😁
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
And Everett’s . . .

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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago

This is Juliet’s.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Does Everette have a board??? I want an Everette board!!!
I can post his and Juliet’s in a minute . . .
I hope one of them dies in the end.
Really? 🙄🤣
I’m also hoping Everette and Sara get married in the future. So… maybe he shouldn’t die.
I will reveal nothing . . . 🤭
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
What exactly does that entail?
Snipercore, reptiles, sci-fi, things like that. Also, I’ve never tried to use a 3D animation engine, but now that you’ve started playing with that, I associate you with the vibe of minimal-effect 3D models. I know that’s very specific and doesn’t make a lot of sense, but it’s in my brain now. Lol.
There’s n…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Yayyy!! They’re back! 🥰
This was a good section too.
The one that seems to be their leader is extremely bold, and he doesn’t seem to care what anyone says— or throws at him.”
Leon smirked, having a hard time stifling a laugh. He could guess who that was
Lol 🤣
Hi Julian, we’re back.”
This did seem a little out of place. I’m…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I want somebody to digitally smack/spam me if I haven’t updated Marcel or Barnes within 24 hours.
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
*Extremely embarrassed at the length of the post* Also Sara, just because I yapped a lot does not mean you have to ‘fix’ anything. I’ve explained how I would edit, but those are my opinions and this is your project. 😊
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
no I haven’t!!!
Oki, I’m going to explain this structure because it seems to work for a looot of stories! 🙃 It’s very broad/all-encompassing, except for some Eastern cultures and the like.
I did not invent all of this. I listened to Brandon Sanderson’s writing lectures and explained them in my own words. So just to clarify, I…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I don’t like being super graphic/body horror about it, I just make sure my favorite characters come out of it with a tangible reminder of the incident.
Tangible reminder is a fun trope. I haven’t used it too often. I can’t remember the last time I gave a character a dramatic scar. It feels like something that belongs in the Keilah genre. :p
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
To be faaiir I do not even know who Alec and Everette are. Yet. I’m getting there. 🤣
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
But it’s so sad when the favorite character dies!!! And I love crying over books!!
If they don’t die she at least needs to make life miserable for them for a few chapters.
But trauma doesn’t automatically make characters deeeeep… 😫 Actually side note, I’ve been thinking about this topic and we should make a thread for…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Maybe she just has a very common face 🤷🏻♀️🤣
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
That’s so insane… 👀
Lately my book has been feeling more real to me, but that’s just because I’ve been fleshing things out more. i didn’t think my characters were ACTUALLY being brought to life. 😳😂
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
He and Alec are my favorite.
I hope one of them dies in the end.
Why am I not surprised loll
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
*Slips in* I’ve also met somebody who looks like one of your Hallie faceclaims. 😅 First moodboard, left, with the long red hair. It’s crazy how similar they look. I’ve had this thought since you started using the photo, but never thought to tell you for some reason.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I mean, if I bumped up the year the story takes place a decade or two, it would be even more realistic cuz then she’d be of marrying age!!! 😆
Oh no!! I have some characters from older WIPs that I would not like to meet 🫣😂
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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