Glitter Ocelot

@emily ooooh yeah those… I won’t agree with Shannon that they’re the best, but they come in second place.

@ingridrd very good ones! 🙂

@emily what I meant is” what is the offending series shannon claims is better?”

@emily may I ask what the suspect series is??

@emily ooohh!! lovely!

@emily bye! I’m retiring now as well!

@emily ooh learning together (goes and see’s if there’s a KP article on killing a character for the first time….) 😛

@emily thanks! I didn’t think so but then I’ve never really written anything with death in it and I wanted to delicately handle it.

@emily whattttt!!! How could she!

@ingridrd Oh yay! (Some how I didn’t see your post….)
Well thank you

@emily Yes I know but the story starts out with baby already having passed away so there’s not a whole lot of attach meant. Well is it morbid? I’m trying for it not to be.

@ingridrd Bye!!!

@ingridrd @emily can you guys give me some quick feed back?
Is this to weird, or morbid at all?

I walked to the cradle and gently lifted my daughter from it. She seemed so much more fragile in death than in life.
The baby has been dead a few hours at this point in the story. (Haha huge spoiler…)

@emily also the romance part is fun because I want it to be clean, and non-sappy so it’s short and sweet. Which for some reason is way more appealing and likeable to me.

@ingridrd Oh praise God! (Here’s the unofficial basic plot.):
Molly Tailor a young woman, daughter of a commanding officer in the Queen’s Navy, wife of a sailor. Life seemed happy for her, her husband had just returned from a venture and was going to be home over winter, but one morning she woke up alone.
Time revealed that her husband’s shi…[Read more]

@emily the story I told you and shannon about, the pirateish one.

@ingridrd hugs you back (Also how is your sister?)

@emily @ingridrd I shall join y’all!!!

@ingridrd nope never read them, the Benedict society is very good Historical fiction and modern adventure (Que baker family series)
@dekreel @emily oh phew I’m not alone 😀
@christi-eaton Benedict society ahhhhh, some of my favorites!!!! Mr. Benedict is so sweet, ahh me loves them so much!!

@kballen oh that one is really good!

@ingridrd *turns away guiltily* What!? No, don’t look at me. I’m not crying. NO. *wipes eyes, trying to be sneaky about it* *fails at being sneaky* I don’t have any critiques. Well done! *goes off in search of a tissue* *but not because I’m crying or anything*