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Snapper replied to the topic Does This Style Make Any Sense? in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine AH! I love the plotline. I really want to know what happens. Like really. Write more now.
The only things I think you need to do is add some paragraph breaks–those make it easier to read. And try to use the word ‘so’ less. It’s alright to use it with this guys style, but a bit less would be better.
It’s also a bit fast-paced. If…[Read more]
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Hannah replied to the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
@daeus if you need readers still, I’m in. Like Mallory my library has been dry of anything to read.
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Book Recommendations in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@jane-maree @sam-kowal Hmm… I don’t know how Mizzy got superpowers either. I’m pretty sure the book never says what they were. *scratches head contemplatively*
Fav characters anyone? Mine was Cody. I now understand that my computer works because of the wee fairies livin’ in it. xD
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 10 months ago
@warrenluther04 I know for a fact that I REALLY WANT TO READ IT. *cough* As for posting it… Well, it depends on how long it is …
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How long is it?
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Snapper replied to the topic Let me introduce myself… in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 10 months ago
Yes, the other person we have from England is @theacornman unless I’m wrong. And I am never wrong.
Anywho, back to introduction. *shakes hand wildly* hi hi and doubly hi! Cozy crime sounds interesting–and funny. 😀 What’s your favorite music group?
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Let me introduce myself… in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 10 months ago
@pickupyourpenandwrite Welcome and salutations! *throws confetti*Â What’s you’re favorite genre to read? Do you have a favorite book?
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Snapper replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 6 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths @dekreel @notawriter @catwing
Ike would rather…
Be painted by a realistic artist–that way his eyes wouldn’t be so big.
Tree, so that no one would sit on him.
Sky-diving, cause at least he can still breath without having to use an oxygen tank.
Learn an instrument, because only servants do cooking. (And Louise, Ike…[Read more]
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 6 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine Oo, I like Anlone!
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 10 months ago
@warrenluther04 Here he is! What do you think?
Cole Avis:
As for your fanfiction, I think it might be okay to post it so long as you credit that it’s based off the Star Wars Universe. 😀 If you still have concerns, I’d ask @aratrea or @daeus about that.
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Snapper replied to the topic Fantasy Medicinal Plant Names? in the forum Fantasy 6 years, 10 months ago
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 6 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine Why, thank you! Larik is one of my favorites, too.
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Book Recommendations in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@sam-kowal @jane-maree *runs in panting* I hear the word “Reckoners,” I come running. 😀 I just finished Calamity yesterday. I’m still in the wandering-around-in-a-book-daze faze. *flailing* *book dazed-ness*
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Snapper posted an update 6 years, 10 months ago
@radically-surrendered Hi! I thought I’d let you know that I tagged you for the Liebster Award on my blog. If you’ve seen it that’s fine, but one of the rules is to notify the people you tagged… so I thought I’d notify you. XD
https://silverphoenixwriter.blogspot.com/2018/01/secondary-introduction-liebster-award.html
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 6 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine This is the bestiest! *flailing* Here are some names I’ve dreamed up but will never use:
Ero
Driana
Romanique ( roh-man-EEK. I don’t know if this is a boy’s name or a girl’s…)
Ivari
Larik
Arax
Railos
Evina
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Snapper replied to the topic Short Story Characteristics in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
Heh. You tagged me.
Welp, writing short stories is actually really difficult for me. The only thing harder than writing a short story for me is coming up with a character’s name. XD
But I’ll give you what advice I can from the few successful times I’ve written or read short stories.
So, if you do have a big story world, don’t…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Would You Read This? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
@waterlily This does sound like a neat concept! The only thing that doesn’t quite make sense to me is how the seawyrms could have her family crest marked on them? Am I just misunderstanding? Of course, when you go to write this you can definitely explain in better detail. XD
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 10 months ago
@warrenluther04 I’d like to try Cole Avis.
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Irrational or Rational? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@inkling-for-Christ Oo, him being the son of the governor really puts the pressure on him. *rubs hands together*
And yes, I love the Igyfeathers! *ahem* The Wingabys! Oh well, you know what I mean. 😀 Do you have a favorite character?
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Reader Base in the forum Publishing & Platform 6 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper What they said 😉
Quick tip: Make a goal list. Doing as many of these as you can is a fabulous goal, but don’t try and do them all at once. Pick your top three priorities (say like, email list, submitting a short story to a site and joining a new writing community) Focus on getting those three goals established/done before adding…[Read more]
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Kina Lamb and Hannah are now friends 6 years, 10 months ago
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