@gideon-sowdon
Active 1 year, 6 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Snapper replied to the topic Does This Style Make Any Sense? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@rochellaine AH! I love the plotline. I really want to know what happens. Like really. Write more now.
The only things I think you need to do is add some paragraph breaks–those make it easier to read. And try to use the word ‘so’ less. It’s alright to use it with this guys style, but a bit less would be better.
It’s also a bit fast-paced. If…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Inserting Pictures in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 3 months ago
I’ve done a bull’s eye, a (large) earthworm, a crayfish, a perch, and a frog. This year I’ll also get to do a fetal pig! And yes, I do like biology. 😉 @dekreel.
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ClaireC replied to the topic Inserting Pictures in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 3 months ago
ahhh, okay. @dekreel. I know, right?!
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ClaireC replied to the topic Inserting Pictures in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 3 months ago
😀 @jane-maree, do you have a picture?
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ClaireC replied to the topic Inserting Pictures in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 3 months ago
@ethryndal. This topic has become surprisingly gruesome… except for the lovely froggie kiss. Please note my lips aren’t actually touching his. I wouldn’t put my lips on something I wouldn’t touch with my fingers. He’d been living in formaldehyde solution for a long time!
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ClaireC replied to the topic Inserting Pictures in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 3 months ago
He didn’t turn into a prince. This didn’t make sense till I later found out ‘he’ was a female.
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ClaireC replied to the topic Inserting Pictures in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 3 months ago
The fish’s brain!!!
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ClaireC replied to the topic Inserting Pictures in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 3 months ago
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ClaireC replied to the topic Inserting Pictures in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 3 months ago
“Disturbingly fascinating”. That’s a great way to describe it! I dissected a frog yesterday…
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ClaireC replied to the topic Calling all artists! in the forum Characters 8 years, 3 months ago
Thanks, @gabbyj. It’s great! 🙂
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 3 months ago
@gabbyj Lawson is nineteen or so.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 3 months ago
@ingridrd Awwwww, I love it! Thank you!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 3 months ago
Human. @dekreel
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Be in Our Newsletter!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
Friday is here! That means there’s only a few days left before the Tuesday newsletter goes out! Want to get your advice in before then? Drop it here!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Let me introduce myself… in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 3 months ago
Oh, I haven’t seen Hamilton either. I just…obsess over the soundtrack. Les Mis is a cool musical. I’ve really only seen the movie once, and it made me cry so much that I vowed never to watch it again.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 3 months ago
Hello all! I’m just gonna put a list of my characters down below, and y’all can draw whichever one you want. Or none of them. Guess that’s fine too.
Evyn~ the princess of my little kingdom. She’s probably seventeen or so, but she looks a bit younger. Roundish face, light brown hair, and hazel eyes. She’s got a tiny scar above her mouth, kinda…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Let me introduce myself… in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 3 months ago
Hello there! @pickupyourpenandwrite Your name reminds me of a song from the musical Hamilton…have you ever heard of it?
Welcome to KP! I hope you enjoy your time here!
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ClaireC replied to the topic Let me introduce myself… in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 3 months ago
Hey @pickupyourpenandwrite! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet! So glad to have you here. Where in England are you from?
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Book Recommendations in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@Daughteroftheking *strokes chin* No idea…
Ooh favourite characters? Hmm…Cody was pretty funny. Mizzy was good. Tia was pretty cool. David was also good (and his metaphors/similes are the most genius things ever XD)….I don’t know if I can pick.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic A Catwing Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@Catwing it’s hilarious. XD
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