Darik Swisher

I thought I remember hearing about a worksheet to the help with the home work during the video? did I hear right?

I thought I remember hearing about a worksheet to the help with the home work during the video? did I here right?

we watched it yesterday and are up to the homework now.

@Josiah DeGraaf we watched it yesterday and are up to the homework now.

Every thing in it.

how to recognize the themes that are in my story and how to and new themes and chage or remove the others.

plus all the above.

@Anna-Brie

“so did you hear it?” asked Gavin again.
“hear what?”
“it was a bird. people have found that following them can be very useful. they lead you to some place you need to go. there it is again. they’re really rare, and special”
“what? you mean that scratching noise?” I said Following Gavin.
“yeah. I think it went this way,” Said Gavin walking off to…[Read more]

“so did you hear it?” asked Gavin again.
“hear what?”
“it was a bird. people have found that following them can be very useful. they lead you to some place you need to go. there it is again. they’re really rare, and special”
“what? you mean that scratching noise?” I said Following Gavin.
“yeah. I think it went this way,” Said Gavin walking off to…[Read more]

“so did you hear it?” asked Gavin again.
“hear what?”
“it was a bird. people have found that following them can be very useful. they lead you to some place you need to go. there it is again. they’re really rare, and special”
“what? you mean that scratching noise?” I said Following Gavin.
“yeah. I think it went this way,” Said Gavin walking off to…[Read more]

@Northerner
I so far in my writing haven’t had the story from the two POVs overlap, I can see why doing it could make the story confusing.

I first did it in my WIP when me MC was absent. so then I did it a few other times to give the story some more… something, I cant think of the right word…
this is my first work in first person, the previous two were in third person. (I had to many ideas to get passed the first draft on any of them. I’ll try and get to that later in the year.)

I have found what everyone has said here very useful. but I was wondering what every one thought about multiple POVs all in first person?

@daeus @bluejay @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @leumeister @perfectfifths @winter-rose @overcomer @jess @writefury @corissa-maiden-of-praise @anne-of-lothlorien @alia @the-bean @mark-kamibaya @warrioroftherealm…[Read more]

I got the image url from when @bluejay psoted it for me. and it work!
but i’m not sure how that will help.

I got the image url from when @bluejay psoted it for me. and it work!

nope

lets try this.

@bluejay Thanks