Grace H.

@jenwriter17  What they said 😉

@rochellaine  @aratrea  @gh24682468999  Thank you!

@aratrea @rochellaine @gh24682468999 Oooooh, that explains it. I haven’t finished watching that video 🙂

@catwing Wow…That is amazing.  And at the end you find out it’s not a pickle after all, but still don’t like it?  Hahahahahaha!!!!!

Oh, no! your topics are really mean… 😀 😀 Especially the one you gave Grace!  How do you put “eucalyptus” in a poem?!

@gh24682468999 I’m sorry for you, but I can’t wait to read the poem! 🙂

@rochellaine I am a picky eater.
@dekreel No I don’t want your pickle.
Tada…
An Ode to a Pickle

O, pickle I am not going to eat you, you are too pickley for my tastes.
But poor pickle I am sorry I dropped you on the kitchen floor.
I didn’t think my brother would toss you at me.
But he did, and I missed catching you by a mile.
Now you will lie…[Read more]

@jenwriter17  @epicaddie2  @rochellaine  @gh24682468999  @ingridrd  @notawriter  Oh, and thank you all for the replies on the last one X’D

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@gh24682468999 Thank you! I am glad to find it’s such a welcoming community. It’s hard not to enjoy it!

My inbox is exploding. Which a good thing!

@sam-kowal Good point, I was reading the Hobbit at about that age too. As for dramatic, I think I can achieve that. *cough*not saying I have the tendency to be overdramatic. not saying that at all*cough* 😉

@notawriter Thank you muchly!

@ingridrd Why thank you!

@introvert_girl *scribbling down notes*…[Read more]

@gh24682468999  That’s so cool!! Did you get to look at the books?

Thanks! Seeya later 😉

@gh24682468999  Make sense! It is kind of tricky. I like haikus because they’re fun and fairly easy to compose.

Ummm… Sometimes I might glance through Snapper’s LOKD, but otherwise I just go by what I know, and what other Kapeefers tell me about themselves. It’s pretty easy X)

Have you ever heard of the ship Logos Hope?

@gh24682468999  Hi!! I’m writing the KPA again

Oooh, I love haikus! Have a collection of them myself. Had you ever written haikus before?

@rochellaine I think that counts too. At least for my research and questions. 😀 Thank you.
@sleepwalkingmk *facepalm* I completely forgot that she needs to go to school. But she will be homeschooled. How did I overlook that?
@sarah-anson Sadly Vanessa will still have to be school while they are there.
I’m a perfect angel.
Wow, that could be…[Read more]

@catwing I’m a semi-MK, if that’s possible. (I insist that it is. 😀 )  I say that because my family has a ministry that causes us to travel across the country a lot, and during the spring we’ve sometimes been in a different state every week.  You know a little bit about us, since we’ve met. 🙂

So anyway, one of the things that annoys me the m…[Read more]

@gh24682468999 I actually think some of the beauty of the poem is that it’s not clear and definitive, but rather sweet and floating, like this kind of poetry should be.  I am afraid that putting a defining line into it might ruin it.  Maybe you could just give it a title that explains what’s going on?  Then you could keep the poem mostly the wa…[Read more]

Ooh. I love this! @gh24682468999 I really love poetry. For free verse, it’s actually much easier to edit, because you don’t need to worry about the structure and keeping the rhyme.

To revise, I would make sure that the words are clear and concise. Choose your wording very carefully, especially with something short like this.

Maybe, you could…[Read more]

@gh24682468999
I have pretty limited experience with poetry, and especially free verse. I just wanted to drop in and say how awesome that poem is- it’s kind of the exact thing I like, sort of a slightly dreamy, fantastical narrative with a strong emotional pull.

@gh24682468999

😀 XD That’s my favorite line in it, by far

Chairs, Stan is coming for you.

@gh24682468999 Wow!  It’s beautiful!  I don’t really know how to critique free verse, because most of my poems have pretty standard structure and rhyme. 😀  But I’ve attempted free verse a couple of times, and when I showed my mom, (who said she didn’t know how to critique free verse either) what she told me was to make it flow better, and that ac…[Read more]

@gh24682468999  I love it! It’s pretty!

The only thing I would do is make it easier to understand. Because I’m not quite grasping the message 🙂

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Thank you all!! I had fun