Grace H.

@jess-penrose Wait, you guys have mechanical pencils in Australia, right?

@winter-rose XD I love them too. So fun. 😀

Yes. Writing is hard —

@daeus Okay, I just sat down to read this, and I didn’t get back up until I had finished it. Wonderful! You developed amazing character depth in a short amount of time. I hope you don’t mind free publicity, because I will be recommending this to people. Seriously, great story! 😀

@jess-penrose Never. I use mechanical pencils. Constantly sharp. Never blunt.

@jess-penrose Points are my specialty.

@winter-rose Dragon is good. *nod* Dragon just now reached 10,000 words in new novel. *nod* Writing is difficult sometimes. *nod* I will persevere. *nod*

@jess-penrose I’m guessing because you replied that you’re alive. 😉

@winter-rose

@jess-penrose Ah. *facesmack* I meant ‘What about you two?’

@jess-penrose @winter-rose I’m alive now, but are two?

@dekreel @daeus Thanks guys! Good advice. Yeah, um, I guess my MC does somehow know some people’s thoughts when I’m writing in 3rd person, so I’ll have to fix that. The only problem would be if the story really needs a scene that the MC doesn’t know about… I’ll figure something out. 🙂

@jane-maree @jess-penrose I actually have to sign out now.. *nooooo* But I wrote a nice chapter. 1245 words.

*save me some pizza Jane.*

@jess-penrose And I am replying late to this. 😀 Blank page eh? Is it still blank?

Okayyy, that was a bit long and complicated…

@jess-penrose You still there?

@supermonkey42  It can be confusing if the story isn’t written with good transisions in between 1st and 3rd person. Since the story is mainly in 1st person, I think it should be based upon what the character knows.

When you have a section that’s in 3rd person, you could have the character say, “While I was doing this or while I was at that place…[Read more]

@ingridrd Thankee.

@emily Yeah, I’m excited to announce it. 🙂  Wel, I’m going to sign off from here, but I’ll still be around the kingdom 😉

Thanks, @sam-kowal! Oh, and sorry about your furniture XD  Ever considered making an allowance just for furniture for times like these?

WHOA, Stan, what a fire! I think it is a record!

@emily Okay. I have officially chosen the main characters… So yeah, very productive XD