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Snapper replied to the topic Favorite Childhood Book in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@alia *gasp* The Westing Game by Ellen Raskin!!! I love that boooook!
@dekreel You know, surprisingly for the writer I am, I read so little. I really only read the Magic Tree House, but I love them. All of them!! They were great! And are, may I add. But yeah, I’ve always had a problem of not reading much. I’l admit I didn’t read the Chronicles…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@catwing Man. I missed the Incredibles party.
“Mr. Incredible calling for help? Help me! Help me!”
But this is a quote for you all: “He stayed at the drive-through till sunrise. He may have dozed off once or twice.”
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Snapper replied to the topic The Geekiest Xmas Song in the Universe in the forum Music 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel Sweet! Can you give me all of this somehow virtually? 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic The 12 Kapeefer Days of Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@mariposa That’s a lot of snapping.
Here I go a-snapping seven times. *chuckles* Which chair is first? 😀 @ethryndal Your chair looks nice.
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Snapper replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel And because I don’t have any weaknesses whatsoever (none that would be helpful to you, leastways….) I’m going to make one up. Anger issues. I melt stuff, don’t I? How ’bout I get angry when people argue with me and when my stories aren’t working properly. K? If not….which one of those weaknesses does no one else have…?
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Snapper replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel MMM….nah. You can write me as the perfect character. 😉
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Joy replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@ingridrd @daughteroftheking @xonos-darkgrate @catwing
“Doh! Get it?”
Hint: It’s not the Simpsons
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Joy replied to the topic Christmas Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@alia Sorry I didn’t reply sooner!
The line “Must tell the Jolly old elf” in particular should be longer. Maybe “I must report now to the Jolly old elf.”
In general, the more similar the poem lines in a poem are in terms of syllables, the more beautiful the poem as a whole will be. So maybe you could lengthen/shorten all your lines to the same…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Anyone Admit an Affection About Animation? in the forum Film 8 years, 9 months ago
Oh, and I just saw your walking robot animation. I loved the lighting and “camerawork!”
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Joy replied to the topic Anyone Admit an Affection About Animation? in the forum Film 8 years, 9 months ago
@leumeister I am interested in animation because my Dad is a computer geek! I understand the term “vector graphics,” because of him! I don’t know who else knows what that is XD Can you remind me what “armature” means? I can’t believe I don’t remember!
The only little animation I’ve done is stop-motion. I’ve done it with LEGOs, drawings, and e…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Character Naming Help!! in the forum Characters 8 years, 9 months ago
@leumeister Of those two I would pick Tristan — I like that name (if I haven’t mentioned before) 🙂
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic Short Story Critique? *hopeful glance around* in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@ingridrd Aww, thanks! And thank you for your comment! It was much needed 😀
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic Short Story Critique? *hopeful glance around* in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel Thanks so much! I’ll keep that in mind as I edit it.
@supermonkey42 Thank you 🙂
@jane-maree Thank you for your comments! They’ve helped so much! 😀
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate I think I recognize the second one from the Avengers: Infinity War trailer… Is it Thanos? And is three Ultron? I’m not sure though. My Avengers knowledge is a bit rusty 😛
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Joy replied to the topic The 12 Kapeefer Days of Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@mariposa Well, sci-fi doesn’t have anything to do with KP, soooooooooo…
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Joy replied to the topic The 12 Kapeefer Days of Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@mariposa AAAH! Don’t steal my thunder!!!!
It’s still awesome! 😉
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Short Story Critique? *hopeful glance around* in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@sleepwalkingmk I like it. I actually enjoy the stillness of it. 👍
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Joy replied to the topic Short Story Critique? *hopeful glance around* in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@sleepwalkingmk *grins ear to ear* This is so sweet!! Let’s see… I like how you set the scene, but I also think you should spend more time talking about what the narrator is thinking. It’s a little idle right now, talking mostly about the things going on around her. It’s still awesome though! Also, “a while” is one word: “awhile.” 🙂
Nice job!! 😉
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Joy replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate My dad was laid off too! We’re in this together!! 😁😉 Anyways, yeah I’ll definitely pray for you!
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SleepwalkingMK started the topic Short Story Critique? *hopeful glance around* in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
Hello! I was wondering if anyone would like to read over a little short story I wrote for a Christmas contest. (The criteria for the contest are: “anything Christmasy” and “under 800 words.”) This story is about 600 words. This is the link (I’m not sure if it would all fit in this text box): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1B0-tYspZd5NDCmeDdp6C8…[Read more]
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