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@rochellaine  Right. That was just a suggestion. I think maybe you should take out ONE of her dialogues since she has two. That way you’ll hint at her importance….. A little structural foreshadowing for ya! 😉

(I actually have no idea if “structural foreshadowing” is actually a thing XD )

Edit: GAAAAA! GUYS I’M AN ECCENTRIC MENTOR!! ……

@rochellaine  Wonderful, thanks! I made some comments 🙂

@clairec  Wow 🙂

I’ve done a fetal pig, a frog, an owl pellet………. and one or two other things that I can’t remember

@emily-d  You don’t like “All I Need is You?!” Why?

My two favorite songs by Hollyn are “Obvious?” and “Girl” I also really like “In Awe”

@rochellaine  I like it! I love how casual the narrator sounds. Except he sounds a little too bumbly to me. It’s an interesting story, but I think I would cut out some of the “bumbling” if you know what I mean. That would make it much more interesting in my opinion. But then again, I personally favor action. What can I say? *shrug*

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@clairec  Hehe, do you like biology? I think it’s cool! What have you dissected?

@waterlily  Haha, that’s perfect! I might use that… Ohh, unless you’re already using it, which is fine XD

@clairec  She said she did it when she was eight or something, so I doubt it

*looks at fish brain picture*  Eww…..  Cooooooooooll

(I like biology XP )

@rochellaine  Oh, that’s funny!! Good signature choice! 😉

@mnvalentine  Okay! I’ll write an article!! Not sure about the book though XD

@clairec  LOL @jane-maree Also kissed a frog, I think

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@rochellaine  Yeah, can you just tell me? I’m too impatient to read the whole thing XD

@rochellaine  Kevin looks fine! And yeah, I like Dekreel’s hair (except his beard isn’t actually that thick, but eh)

BTW what does your signature mean? It’s funny! 🙂

@rochellaine  Ooh! Those are cool! Thank you!! I especially like Kevin! 😀

@mnvalentine  Ohh, I should have thought about writing an article! Wow, I should!

A BOOK?! Ooooh, mayyyyyyybe when I have learned more about it X’D

@ingridrd  Awwwww! GAH! They’re awesome!! <3  Thank you so much!! 😀