Folith-Feolin

@grcr

Aaaarrrrttt! First of all, the siblings are very cute and the different nuances in design for each sibling are *chef’s kiss* The other two drawings are fun too. Your style reminds me of metallic materials and art, probably because of the way you highlight hair.

@ellette-giselle

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

That is so exciting! I can’t wait to finish it.

*Dumps confetti on your head*

Work is letting up for a bit (as in, about to be over for the Summer) so I’ll actually have the time I want to read and comment.

@highscribeofaetherium

I just looked back at the chart thingy and realized/remembered I’m to give you feedback ect.  what types of feedback would you like? Do you need help becoming unstuck? I’m up for pretty much anything; story, brainstorm, writing, nagging–whatever you need and or want.

And ohhh. Yea, I’m behind too. Fell off the train…[Read more]

@rae

Aww, girl. <3 I think you need a pick-me-up.

Insecurities and attachment issues don’t mean you aren’t an amazing choice for a friend. Sometimes I question whether I am friends with somebody too, even if I’ve known them forever. All of us go through those phases. Don’t feel ashamed, just be aware of yourself.

Now, I can’t give you much advi…[Read more]

Oh my goodness @felicity I just saw you were online recently when I was checking my friends list lol! I think about you sometimes, hope you’re doing well :3

The amount of parentheses I used is criminal

Okay here we go! Change anything you want if you use this.

Magic System Questionaire

 

Basic Magic Information

Write a summary (in a couple sentences) for your magic system. How would you quickly summarize it for someone?

What terminology do you use within your system? (Invented words or not)

What…

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@keilah-h

I’m sorry to take the discussion off theremins, but I got a rant.

You’re fine, carry on lol.

some have the tendency to baby the characters, to dumb them down, especially the ones who have some kind of issues with some aspect of themselves.

I think there’s a difference between literally thinking the character is like that, and just m…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Aw, what a fine little gray lady <3 The colors look very natural.

@keilah-h

I didn’t know about the robots. I’ll have to look that up.

ngl I used to be really scared of its noise, it’s so weird. But now I kinda like it.

The moment I heard the noise, I was obsessed. I knew I had to incorporate the music and technology into some kind of magic system. 🤣 So here I am, spending much of my writing time looking for a…[Read more]

@rae @the_lost-journal @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h

Yeah, it is pretty cool!! Almost nobody I talk to knows what it is, so I’m always explaining. XD Thank you for the names, by the way, Ruth and Kefa!

So how did they accidentally invent it?

Leon was a Russian inventor who was actually trying to invent devices for wartime. The instrument was…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I have read them. 🙂 I’ve just been gone at a friend’s for the past couple days and haven’t given myself time to respond.

I want to rant about theremins. >:3

A theremin is an electric instrument invented accidentally in the 1920s. It is played without any physical contact by the performer. Two antennas create electromagnetic fields, and the performer waves their hand around the antennas to manipulate pitch and volume.

Finding a theremin is hard because there…[Read more]

I’m reawakening this topic because I’m putting together a list of magic system questions for myself. (Felt like updating my world bible.) They will be posted here when I’m done!

@rae

You’re not alone when it comes to getting easily distracted.

Should I write Farewell in first person?

Hmmm, can’t say. It seemed straightforward enough in third person from what I remember.

I finished all the short stories, but I didn’t give you feedback for all of them I’m afraid. 😅

@rae

How’s the editing going so far? I bet you’re super tired by now. XD

@ellette-giselle

What is Jonathan’s arc supposed to be?

I just watched Animation vs. Minecraft, and it was super wholesome, I loved it