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Active 1 year, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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whaley replied to the topic Scenes in the forum Plotting 1 year, 3 months ago
*Thinks hard* Well for me, while watching movies or reading, each scene has a character decision in it, or at least it reveals something new about a character. In this way, it’s like each scene has a mini plot point that sets up the new status quo for the next scene.
For example: Scene 1: Joe debates between two scenarios, and decides…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
And yeah, I’m good if the library group are up at the crack of dawn. Makes sense if they’re studying.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Alright moving on, let’s get this day wrapped up
Seb
“Shift’s up!”
One of the kitchen hands yelled in their direction, causing all three kids to jump. Soap suds fluttered to the floor.
Seb dropped what he was about to say. He grabbed the puppy and handed it to Ellie, covering it with a towel. “We don’t want to lose him, right? You…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
*Sighs extremely loudly and dramatically* I feel you, girl. Life is too complicated to be thinking about complicated stories.
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Koshka replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
*whimpers*
I’m struggling too right now. Just trying to make the time to write, and then when I do I find myself staring blankly at the page wondering why anything but my WIP will write bit not the WIP…
*Sighs*
I’ve also only finished first drafts for short stories, not a novel yet. Which is something I’m hoping to change this year but life.
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@linus-smallprint Looks good!! You can definitely scan a drawing in, although you may want to do some research to make sure it translates smoothly to digital.
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whaley replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Tags @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @ellette-giselle @godlyfantasy12 @anyoneiforgotandanyonewhowantstotalkregardlessofactivity
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whaley started the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I’ve finished a draft before, and thus I should know what I’m doing. XD However, I just started a new project, and the first draft is giving me trouble. Shocker, I know. I’m absolutely sure no one else has experienced this fantastical phenomenon.
My question is, how do you tough through some of the sections which aren’t as fun to write? And how…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m good with moving a day forward, if I can roleplay Barnes concluding this side-adventure first. :] I’ll get to it in the next couple hours.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@loopylynn
Ooops. Sorry. This makes sense.
*Nods*
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I think some of the others already were RPing as daytime too anyway…?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I kind of made it day. It’s like when Joshua had the sun and moon stand still….talk about taking verses out of reference.
Sorry, I realized I didn’t tag you in the intro RP.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I think I already know them. =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Syph
This building was big. A high arched door way soared overhead, long tendrils of ivy climbing up the span. The little sprite sucked in a fortifying breath and placed one foot on the threshold. Come on you guppie.
It was just a building. And people. Way too many people that towered like overgrown Wingless. He shuddered and forced his ot…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Awesome! I’ll stick him outside the school (and let’s say it’s like, 7:30 am).
Also, he’s a character I made up for my sister’s story, so she has the right to correct me on things, or adjust stuff that doesn’t fit as she likes.
Description
Sypher is a water sprite. He is tall for his people at 4 feet 5 inches (
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Yeah, actually….how would Rac like to meet a character of mine? We’d have to jump it to the morning (night time aught to be over by now anyway), but if you’d like I’ll throw Syph in.
Rae’s Alpha might actually like to meet him too….
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Leo
“Thank you, Leo.”
The words were soft–Leo almost didn’t hear them. He looked up from repacking the first aid kit to see Rory’s face disappear farther into his pillow. The comforter rose and fell in a deep sigh, then fell into a steady, even rhythm.
Leo smiled. Whispered a “Goodnight, God bless you,” and s…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
He doesn’t actually want to kill anyone, but he’s a walking disaster so the middle works, lol
Yep
Rory totally looks like a cinnamon roll. I mean, I haven’t seen a picture of him, but he totally gives off cinnamon roll vibes
I also debated the ‘could actually kill you’ because could he actually? My sister said Rory would pop emotional…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Sorry, I had to go look up how to take care of someone who lost blood….XD
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