@folith-feolin
Active 8 months, 4 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
- Total Posts: 311
-
whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Agh… Having read this, I am completely divided. And I mean seriously divided, which doesn’t happen to me often when giving an opinion.
If Eric pulled a Kalmar, I honestly think the comparisons to Wingfeather wouldn’t stop. There are already similarities in lore, and while there are differences, Featherheads are probably g…[Read more]
-
whaley replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Heeeyy I saw that museum immortal animation too!! XD Out of all the YouTube videos, that’s crazy. Yeah, I bet it will be really fun to imagine and write.
-
whaley replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
However, one this is one thing I know of that does help me. I find that something that motivates me is having people share it with me and give me some thoughts right away.
My first draft, as it is, is very undecipherable. However I am comfortable sharing things with my little sister and I’ll keep this in mind.
 Keep in mind…
-
whaley replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
So… the first draft of Guardian Angels I literally started writing while waiting for a piano lesson
So real, though. I probably invented 50% of my early story concepts while waiting for piano lessons.
Sorry, don’t think I am qualified to help even if I could.
It’s okay! If you get an idea, shout it out, because I think anyone with exp…[Read more]
-
whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
I also didn’t know what was in the Pale Forest biome, so that was interesting.
-
whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Girl, I spawned in that seed and nearly had a heart attack. XD I am not used to playing video games and I got serious motion sickness, but that spawn is super cool and I want to build one of those towers in BotW where you can’t see the bottom.
-
whaley replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
*Ellette proceeds to give her whole process without hesitation*
XD You know what, I’ll take it.
And, write at least 500 words a day. I know that’s not much, but making sure you touch your draft every day,
See, 500 words is easy, but sometimes I finish and realize the trajectory is all wrong. That means if I pick up from there, t…[Read more]
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
I have become used to traumatized bois, tbh I was not surprised XD -
whaley replied to the topic Scenes in the forum Plotting 3 weeks, 2 days ago
*Thinks hard* Well for me, while watching movies or reading, each scene has a character decision in it, or at least it reveals something new about a character. In this way, it’s like each scene has a mini plot point that sets up the new status quo for the next scene.
For example: Scene 1: Joe debates between two scenarios, and decides…[Read more]
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
And yeah, I’m good if the library group are up at the crack of dawn. Makes sense if they’re studying.
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Alright moving on, let’s get this day wrapped up
Seb
“Shift’s up!”
One of the kitchen hands yelled in their direction, causing all three kids to jump. Soap suds fluttered to the floor.
Seb dropped what he was about to say. He grabbed the puppy and handed it to Ellie, covering it with a towel. “We don’t want to lose him, right? You…[Read more]
-
whaley replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
*Sighs extremely loudly and dramatically* I feel you, girl. Life is too complicated to be thinking about complicated stories.
-
Koshka replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
*whimpers*
I’m struggling too right now. Just trying to make the time to write, and then when I do I find myself staring blankly at the page wondering why anything but my WIP will write bit not the WIP…
*Sighs*
I’ve also only finished first drafts for short stories, not a novel yet. Which is something I’m hoping to change this year but life.
-
whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@linus-smallprint Looks good!! You can definitely scan a drawing in, although you may want to do some research to make sure it translates smoothly to digital.
-
whaley replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Tags @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @ellette-giselle @godlyfantasy12 @anyoneiforgotandanyonewhowantstotalkregardlessofactivity
-
whaley started the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I’ve finished a draft before, and thus I should know what I’m doing. XD However, I just started a new project, and the first draft is giving me trouble. Shocker, I know. I’m absolutely sure no one else has experienced this fantastical phenomenon.
My question is, how do you tough through some of the sections which aren’t as fun to write? And how…[Read more]
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I’m good with moving a day forward, if I can roleplay Barnes concluding this side-adventure first. :] I’ll get to it in the next couple hours.
-
Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@loopylynn
Ooops. Sorry. This makes sense.
*Nods*
-
Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I think some of the others already were RPing as daytime too anyway…?
- Load More