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@inkling-for-christ  First off, great job!  And congratulations on being brave enough to want feedback.  Now for my suggestions…*rubs hands together*

Okay, this may come as a shock to you, but my first thought was “delete the entire first chapter”.  It seems sort of unnecessary and a lot of it just dumps info instead of showing.  (Sorry, tryi…[Read more]

@salome01w4g  YESSS!!!!  Praise the Lord!

@salome01w4g Good! God answers prayers. 🙂

@salome01w4g *gasp!* Praise the Lord!!! Oh, Hannah! *big bear hug* I’m so happy!!! Oh I can’t stop thanking God for this!!!

Here, I’ll do it 😉

@emily  @shannon  @ingridrd  @supermonkey42  @daughteroftheking  @kate-flournoy  @catwing  @dragon-snapper  @winter-rose

*can’t stop jumping around* Oh, praise the Lord!!

@dekreel

*Stan dances around in glee*

Epic synopsis 😀

Oh, and yeah, make my hair as blue as you like. (No, Stan, you’re not dying your tail blue too)

I’ve never really written a serious synopsis before. Maybe I’ll try one at some point and post it here.

Anyway… *throws confetti* KPA! 😀 😀

@dragon-snapper  Not too shabby, my friend.  😉  In other words, it’s really good.  I loooove the collage.  Nice work.  *high five*

@perfectfifths   The Fellowship of the Ring…I think Pippin says it.  😉

@salome01w4g  That’s rough…praying for you, friend!

@princessfoo *round eyes* Intriguing! Sounds like something I’d want to read! 🙂

@dragon-snapper  Okay, I just downloaded all the stuff there. Thanks for showing me this!! I’m going to sign off here. Beast out!

@dragon-snapper Do I have to keep putting in my email every time I come to the library?

@emily @shannon  Hasta luego!

@emily  @shannon  @dragon-snapper  Huhh… *subscribes* *downloads questionairre* Ooooooh… This is cool! Thanks, guys!

@dragon-snapper  @emily  @shannon  Are you guys all doing the same one?? Is it online?

@shannon Remember when we first met??? I mentioned that I was a Texan! I’m also in the southeast

@shannon I should know — I’m a Texan! (actually, no. I’m a Taranaran, but I visit Texas a lot 😉 )

I just started writing the short story this morning. I like the story idea, but it also might be too boring and too wordy. So… maybe I’ll just write a collection of haikus instead. Or work on my KPA. Or the Dr Who novella! Soo many possibilities!!

@shannon  @emily  Howdy! I started writing a short story, and I’m contemplating where I should go with it. What about y’all? (Is it just me, or is this Texas?)

@salome01w4g  You are very welcome! We will continue to pray for you and your family! *hugs*

@shannon @emily  Hi, y’all!