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@aislinn-mollisong  Wait so Nikko reminds you? X)

You know you’re a writer when you drop writing terms into conversation like “character arcs” and “themes,” and everyone looks at you like, “Wha…??”

@rochellaine  OHHH that’s right! I love that part! 😀 😀

I didn’t know that was an actual game though O-O

What is your favorite TOS episode? My two favorites are Piece of the Action and The Trouble with Tribbles

Hey guys! So I’m going to reuse an OLD thread and post my updated story snippet for you guys to critique. To make it clear, this is my Doctor Who fan novella. You don’t have to be a Whovian to read it. I’m excited about it because I recently started changing it to first person instead of third. Here is what I have so far!

@theacornman  @pickupyour…[Read more]

@rochellaine I think mainly, it would feel less rambling if you locked into a clearly defined scene. That’s unless you really want to keep the fast-paced, skipping over the details kind of narration, which is quite useful, but I think weakens after you use it for too long.

@dragon-snapper  Mmmmmmm, pizza.

My pleasure! Catch you later!

@dragon-snapper  Right, I feel you

You can do it!

@dragon-snapper  Still? Awwww

What are you working on right now?

@dragon-snapper  Heheh, I would have LOVED the view from the windows though!

Any progress in LOKD3?

@dragon-snapper  I think I just finished installment five. Or four. Ike had just met Kaydon and is now in his boring apartment

@dragon-snapper  Hi!! Sure! 😀

BTW I have been reading the first Sector One book. I’m enjoying it! 🙂

@dragon-snapper  @catwing  @aislinn-mollisong  @winter-rose  @whoever

I’m writing! I think I’m editing my DWN again…

(One thousandth post! O_o)

@rochellaine  Right. That was just a suggestion. I think maybe you should take out ONE of her dialogues since she has two. That way you’ll hint at her importance….. A little structural foreshadowing for ya! 😉

(I actually have no idea if “structural foreshadowing” is actually a thing XD )

Edit: GAAAAA! GUYS I’M AN ECCENTRIC MENTOR!! ……

@rochellaine  Wonderful, thanks! I made some comments 🙂

@clairec  Wow 🙂

I’ve done a fetal pig, a frog, an owl pellet………. and one or two other things that I can’t remember

@emily-d  You don’t like “All I Need is You?!” Why?

My two favorite songs by Hollyn are “Obvious?” and “Girl” I also really like “In Awe”

@jenwriter17 Dystopian! was actually, if I remember correctly, more like ‘utopian’ and it was all about predicting what was going to happen in the future. Prophecy, like @daeus said. And then some authors decided… what the if future isn’t going to be perfect like we think? And then there was dystopian. Modern, more YA focused dystopian sort of…[Read more]

@rochellaine It’s interesting to read, and feels nicely connected to the narrator. It’s a little bit too rambling for me, though. I would like it more if it had more focus and streamline. Also, Joshua is a really funny character XD 😀