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@jonas

Yeah lol. That would be pretty pointless.

@jonas

Lol five words. That has to be a record XD

@keilah-h

Ohhhhhhhh I forgot about that lol. It’s an obscure meme format that most people would never realize exists 😅 so I  just looked it up.

@keilah-h

You mean my pfp? I just looked it up online.

@savannah_grace2009

Loll

@jonas

I’m good with getting back to the heroes now.

@rae

Nice! I really like it!

I agree with what everyone else has said, especially that there were a lot of run-on sentences. But overall, it’s really great so far!

@rae

Those are both amazing! (Sorry I missed the one you posted a few days ago, I don’t have notifics activated so I’m likely to miss tags unless it’s something I check on often)

I love this line:

But the hero is the one who bleeds,

Red drops that fall like planter’s seeds.

Great job with both of them!

Vethe

“Fine!” Vethe snapped, “Go ahead! Survive!” She turned and dashed away again. “Goodbye, Dlek son of Razath.” She shouted over her shoulder as the turned the corner. A window sat in the wall at the end of the hallway. Perfect. She thought. She cast a glance back before launching herself out into thin air.

***

Dramatic exit 😎

Vethe

Vethe snorted. “Yeah, right.” She said, “You stay here and you’re dead. I can’t tell if you’re trying to be heroic or if you’re just stupid.” She pulled on his arm. “Come on.”

@rae

😭😭😭😭😭😫😫😫😫😖😖😖😭😭😖

Vethe

Dlek was either the most hopeless fighter in the history of hopeless fighters, or he had some elaborate plan at work. He seemed to be intentionally cutting the wall…

Ah… She thought, realizing what his plan was. She hacked a chunk out of the wall herself. The ceiling shouldn’t be able withstand too much of its foundations being cut away.…[Read more]

Now I’m imagining this lol:

@savannah_grace2009

Lol

Vethe

Vethe ran down hallways and dodged around corners, looking for a way out.

Suddenly, something whistled past her ear and embedded itself in the wall. A knife.

Great. She thought, turning another corner and dodging another flying knife. You’re dead, Vethe. You are so dead.

*materialized out of nowhere and hits subscribe button before melting stealthily back into the shadows*

@rae

😭😭😭😭😭😭 (oh dear, I almost put a barfing emoji in there)

@jonas

Oh no XD

Vethe

Vethe coughed, rising to her feet. “I don’t think you and I are going to get along very well.” She said, laying a hand on her sword. “You don’t strike me as a very good king.”

And with that she ran.

***

Congratulations, Koshtin, it seems like Vethe’s going to defect without even fighting the heroes 🤦‍♀️