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Active 3 months, 4 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle ooh another board! Jim is really interesting!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character doodles in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Yayyy!!!!! That’s so exciting!!! I’m so happy for you Ava!!! 🥳 *cake for everyone* 🎂
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Sniper
“Can we go at it already?” Trevor looked into the woods impatiently.
“Steady, mate.” I held up my hand to stop him from rushin’ forward. “We don’t know its threat level yet.”
The thing growled and stepped into view. It was somethin’ I’d neva seen before–and it was hideous if ya asked me.
It looked like some kinda…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
It probably wouldn’t fit on his head anyway, even with a chinstrap like they sometimes have.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint lol I just met Oliver the gorb and I have to say I like him because he’s just like my two Aussie characters….XD
I really hope he won’t betray Alan and Tyn or something. (By the way, I like Tyn, She’s really cool.)
Despite the fact that you said Lyens explicitly forbid wearing hats, I keep imagining Oliver wearing a slouch…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper “niece church” lol
@calyhuge your signature haha
I don’t know anyone on here in real life. When my brother gets a bit older I think I’m gonna ask him to join because he has the most amazing story ideas, he’s just not a huge fan of writing them down.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint Well, I think the story is solid, but there are a lot of little missed punctuation and stuff that could be fixed. That’s fine though, it didn’t make the story less enjoyable.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint lollll
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellete-giselle cool!
Jonathan’s really interesting too! Although that scene where they killed his parents was so sad.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle lol! don’t mind my existential crises.
Ron honestly does sound a smidge cooler in a way. He still has to beat out Crosshair though, who’s held the top spot among my favorite military characters for 5 solid years.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I meant “That’s fine he’s only a side character” when you were talking about your guy….lol
lol, yeah, he was never ACTUALLY in the military that I know of, he’s just a hired gun who happens to be great with long-range weapons. He’s also Australian, not American, so that might have something to do with it…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Crosshair’s not as good at the game of attractive smirks but he’s awesome in his own right. He’s also addicted to toothpicks.
He’s the kinda guy who won’t just blast a hole directly in your head, he’ll set mirrors on the walls and ricochet the laser around for a while before it finally hits you.

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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle that’s fine with me lol
let me go find a picture of Crosshair, somehow I don’t have that many on my computer
but in the meantime here’s Mundy giving you a smirk
that I find annoyingly cute and I hate thatdon’t be fooled by his attempt at being amiable. This character’s a deadly trained assassin who’ll put a hole…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character doodles in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character doodles in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Ooooh cool!
(Definetly not getting up late at night to try to be the first responce lol)
Hmmm I think I’ll go with Layson.
Layson is 17. He’s a little over confident and socially awkward. He often times is dating but is not in a serious relationship and never has been. He’s goofy, and girls like to hang out with him because of it. He…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@rae ok!
So this thing’s like the height of a human, let’s say? Or however high Fairy is? (I don’t remember if you ever stated her height, but I remember she was shorter than Silvanis)
I don’t have time for an RP but I’ll get to it tomorrow. I’ll also introduce the creature. (My brother came up with it.)
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
That’s awesome! Any way we could get a link?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @rae @theshadow
Sniper
Somethin’ snapped a twig behind us. At first I thought it was a member of the group, but Everi’s “Did anyone else hear that?” told me that supposition was false.
“Everyone, freeze. We have a creature towards the back to the left,” Silvanis, the bloke with the freaky arm, told us.
“So, what’s th…[Read more]
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