Felicity

@ellette-giselle all righty, I’ll look!

@savannah_grace2009

At first I didn’t want to include that scene because I felt like it was too dark. However, the more I think about all the hurting and broken kids and even adults that have no hope, the more I want to keep this scene. God has given me a voice, and I want to speak for the broken, for the hopeless, and for those who cannot.

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@the_lost-journal I shall pick someone whom I trust lol

@linus-smallprint wow that’s good! I like the shading.

If it ever came to that, someone should go through and save the most important topics (book and art critiques, active roleplays, etc) so that we can just pick up right where we left off.

@linus-smallprint I’d join if you did that!

@the_lost-journal lol nope just 18

thanks for the sword!

KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!

I hope not, this is like the only “social media” I use outside of using youtube posts to share my fan art sometimes.

As for the other stuff, I really appreciated the themes you worked with. That we can’t love ourselves as we should through our own eyes. We have to see us (and others) through God’s love, light, hope. That isn’t easy, but it’s worth it.

I liked the order, how you spliced poem and story together. It made it easy to read and follow.

@ellette-giselle thank you!!! I’m really proud of it. I’m planning to keep digitally redrawing the sketches I did for that story (it’s one of my favorites thanks to all the creatures I got to design for it lol)

@ellette-giselle

Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.

true, but even if you change it to another female name they might still be after you.

Ehh, just

Any thoughts on this whole “White Knight” business?

hmm? I must’ve missed that chapter (happens sometimes), how far back is it so I can read through it?

@the_lost-journal exactly.

Also, your recent chapters were great! It’s good to see that more and more of the empire is turning to God, but I can’t help but wonder if you’re setting them up with nice things only to have it all come crashing down later…….Knowing you XD

@ellette-giselle

the women’s draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my author’s name)

I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.

Pleading medical or religious exemption (if the country has…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Wow. That sixth story was dark, but I know it’s needed.

It’s sad how many people indulge in self harm just “trying to feel”, but since it looks “normal”, like tattoos, piercings, or extreme diets, other people don’t see it for what it is.

My warning wouldn’t be that it’s dark or violent, but that you don’t want to even…[Read more]

On the topic of the sixth story: My cousin went through a self-harm attempt once. I don’t know about the details, but she is still alive so that’s gotta count for something. That story is kinda personal to me now that I see something that could drive someone over the edge.

When I have bad days, days where it seems so dark and hopeless, I…

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@savannah_grace2009 Arcane and Alder are good name switches! I like them. Also, are you going to keep the Payne and Pythonos references? I think you should; when you publish your book people will be like “oh, this is an expansion on that universe.”

also I read your next few chapters!! They’re great!

@hybridlore thanks!

@hybridlore

It’s true! The way you write… I can see it all clearly in my mind! It really IS like a movie!

Gotta agree with Ellette on this. You write very clearly.