Felicity

Reading through it again, I realized most of my “improvements” were already there and I missed them, but there’s still something I can’t put my finger on that doesn’t make sense.

@ellette-giselle honestly hybridlore’s got a point. It happened as a result of their faith, yes, but it’s been long enough in the story that readers might not be paying attention to that. Also, no one’s brought up why they were captured. I’ll get into that more once I’m finished with math work so hold on a sec. I’m not against what’s about to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle ikr??

@ellette-giselle

Oh don’t worry. Things will be bad.

It’s crazy how this kind of sentence excites us.

Writers are nuts.

@theshadow thanks!

currently debating whether I should do some of my other ones today.

@godlyfantasy12 Go for it!!

@ellette-giselle wow, not even at the town yet and they’ve already gotten into a tangle!

I agree with Linus, drawing this out rather than having them immediately get rescued or escape or something makes it more interesting.

@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!

@freed_and_redeemed oooh! I like it so far! If you write any more please post it.

@godlyfantasy12

YES?!?!! XD

@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka HIIIII!!!

Yessss Callan is…not good XD yall want me to post another scene?

@whalekeeper

Okay! I did a Sypher RP above.

Hope you get to feeling and sleeping better. Sounds like both you and Barnes need a good rest.

@loopylin @raxforge

Btw, did y’all see the watercolor Syph my sister posted to the art section a bit back?

Syph

“I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings, I just thought you were confused, so I thought it would be best if you just came and watched. I’m sorry if I hurt you.”

Syph blinked, flushed blue, then white. The air in the classroom hung he…[Read more]

@raxforge @loopylin

Apology? Whoops, I think I missed one. I’ll rp in a minute.

@godlyfantasy12 heyyyy welcome back!!! Glad you’re back to writing your story. I don’t exactly have the time to give feedback yet, but I will TOTALLY be back tomorrow.

@loopylin

XD

Thank you, thank you.

I need to work on consistency, which I get is mostly self-discipline (and which is something I’ve always had to work on, writing life aside). I want to write, but I don’t have to write, and there are many things in my life right now that I have to do. Setting aside a specific time to do what I want, even when I’m tired, has been hard. But I’m tr…[Read more]

Callan’s….oof. I so want to strangle that creep

@godlyfantasy12

*Slowly freaks out*

November scenes!!! She’s writing again!! November! Ara! Ahhhhhhhhhhh-

*Freaking out escalates tenfold*

But ya callan sucks