@felicity
Active 10 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
also, you’re welcome!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint I don’t think the horse is too small; horses vary greatly in size. If you really think it looks wrong, you can increase the size.
Alan’s arms look fine, but there is something a little off about Martha’s. I’m not sure exactly what though. I think the one holding the apple is longer than the one holding the broom by her side.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint awww! He’s so cute! You captured him near perfectly!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle The White Knight incident was also very interesting! I went back and read through the whole thing.
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Esther replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
It also reminds me how God uses the same talents of different people for different purposes. For example, you tend to gravitate towards darker themes (not in a bad way!) and deal with difficult topics that need to be dealt with and seen in the light of God’s love. On the other hand, I tend to focus on the smaller, everyday struggles I personally f…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Sara Sara Sara Sara Sara Sara….
Girl this is literally so good and I wish I had gotten to it sooner!!!
I can tell you poured your heart into this and can see it on every page. I’m so glad you decided to go on with this. It has already impacted me in little ways in the short time I read it and I know God will use it to imp…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle all righty, I’ll look!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
At first I didn’t want to include that scene because I felt like it was too dark. However, the more I think about all the hurting and broken kids and even adults that have no hope, the more I want to keep this scene. God has given me a voice, and I want to speak for the broken, for the hopeless, and for those who cannot.
I u…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@the_lost-journal I shall pick someone whom I trust lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint wow that’s good! I like the shading.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
If it ever came to that, someone should go through and save the most important topics (book and art critiques, active roleplays, etc) so that we can just pick up right where we left off.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint I’d join if you did that!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!
I hope not, this is like the only “social media” I use outside of using youtube posts to share my fan art sometimes.
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
As for the other stuff, I really appreciated the themes you worked with. That we can’t love ourselves as we should through our own eyes. We have to see us (and others) through God’s love, light, hope. That isn’t easy, but it’s worth it.
I liked the order, how you spliced poem and story together. It made it easy to read and follow.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle thank you!!! I’m really proud of it. I’m planning to keep digitally redrawing the sketches I did for that story (it’s one of my favorites thanks to all the creatures I got to design for it lol)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.
true, but even if you change it to another female name they might still be after you.
Ehh, just
Any thoughts on this whole “White Knight” business?
hmm? I must’ve missed that chapter (happens sometimes), how far back is it so I can read through it?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@the_lost-journal exactly.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Also, your recent chapters were great! It’s good to see that more and more of the empire is turning to God, but I can’t help but wonder if you’re setting them up with nice things only to have it all come crashing down later…….Knowing you XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
the women’s draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my author’s name)
I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.
Pleading medical or religious exemption (if the country has…[Read more]
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