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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
I forgot to do this. I’ll try to join in another time though.
O.O Wowzers. I knew he would die, but I hoped she’d remember him.
EEEEEE. You know what I think of this story. =D
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 week, 6 days ago
Joseph or Jesus?
Arrested in the garden
Working for the King
My brother has sold me
The rest are sleepingAbandoned in this cell
God’s will be done
He can take evil
And turn it to goodWhile dreams
Keep me awake
I was meant to rule
Is this the way?
Dreams
to be restored
to the glory I laid asideFavorable dream
In Three days restored
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
I know you’ve already gotten a lot of replies, but I’d be happy to help you brainstorm later today! We can even coordinate being active at the same time if you want some back and forth brainstorming! :))
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
@the_lost_journal
Ahh! I’m so sorry for not replying soon! The notification email got buried in my inbox! 😭
Anyway, it sounds like a really cool story!! It’s giving me Wingfeather Saga vibes, is that what inspired the concepts?? I would love to hear more about the characters and their personalities/backstories!!
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 week, 6 days ago
Eve
I’m an outcast
By the choices I’ve made
I thought it’d be cool
I thought I’d be great
Yeah, I’m an outcast
Guarded away
From the garden where I spent my best days
Now I’m living in pain
Giving birth in the rain
To Cain
And Able
Cursed is the ground
Changing all that’s around
Thorns and sharp teeth on animals
I thought it’d…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint oooh awesome! and you’re welcome!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
a little like this but a grizzly bear instead of a polar bear, and more vicious?
(not my art)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
If you’ve ever seen the first Puss in Boots movie from Dreamworks, there’s a giant mama goose that actually does a good amount of damage to the town she invades while looking for her chick, who the main characters stole. Basing on that alone (I’ve never met a free-roaming goose, that I remember at least), I can see just an ordinary giant goose…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint oh, good to know I’m not alone then! It’s not discouraging at all, it’s just one of those thoughts you have when you’re trying to sleep but your brain won’t let you. Y’know.
And I’m glad you have an explanation ready for why this section feels rushed. Makes sense.
and bruh that Canada meme! We have somethin’ like that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks ago
@grcr you’re welcome 😁
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint ooh interesting!!
Alan’s character development is showing through! It does seem a tiny bit sudden, but I don’t know cause I’ve never actually seen a person get saved and them follow their life immediately afterward. I was saved when I was really young and effectively don’t even remember it, so I can’t even use myself as an…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks ago
@grcr very cool, and I like his name!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle I echo Linus’s statement–this was a great way to re-introduce Adrian to the narrative!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@power I had a song on in the background that started epic then turned really goofy as I read your little poem and it was perfect for it lolllll
thing is, it was by complete coincidence.
@freed_and_redeemed oooh nice scene!!
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
AHHHHHH. I love the name Nikolai. Very nice. I might be more excited about the 3rd book than even the other two, although that would be kinda hard. *Stares hungrily at scene snippet*
As for life, yours is nuts too? It’s kinda reassuring to know I’m not the only KPer accidentally ghosting the kingdom. I don’t know if that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle no it’s not bad, I just haven’t read it yet. Lol
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Koshka replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I wish. XD No, it’s a random adorable picture I found of a russian blue (my favorite cat breed {don’t tell my American tabby}).
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Koshka replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I’d love to, I just don’t think I can right now. I know who I’d put in and everything.
Maybe I can join later though once this semester calms down/ends.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@grcr very cool!
also I agree with whalekeeper that the lower half of the body is a nightmare. I can’t draw the standard 8-head body length; all my characters end up six or so heads in proportional height because any time I try to draw legs as long as everyone says to, it always makes them look way too skinny and stretched.
Maybe that’s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@whalekeeper @hybridlore wherever you decide to move this discussion, can you tag me too? I’m having fun learning about this.
@whaley wow I would watch a TV show or read a multi-part comic about those numbers as you think of them, that’s super cool.
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