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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle I can understand the raining part lol. Me, I actually like it when it’s raining, but the humidity that comes afterward plus the frequent 80-90 degree weather is not fun at all.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle not gonna lie, I’ve never seen you as….as…. *gestures to your depressed posts* this. Critics are likely gonna say way worse about your book, and won’t be as nice as Linus or any of the rest of us about it. It’s just the life of an author.
Also, remember, you can say no to feedback. If you don’t agree with something he said,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon I love how the writer is confused when things don’t go exactly the way she tried to write it lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I wonder……. these books were written so long ago and comparing them to the stuff I have written now, they’re just not as good at all.
I feel you. I look back at some of my old work and I’m like “I wrote this??? Sheesh, this is terrible!”
But then sometimes I look back at my old work and I’m like “With a little reworking, this c…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Leo
“We’re going to fix this tile.”
He opened the bottle of sealant and carefully poured it into the cracks between shards. It pooled over the tile in a nice, whitish gloup. Using a paint scraper from his belt, Leo spread the stuff out until both broken tiles were covered in an even layer.
“This stuff will set up hard as steel…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Leo
“Ah! Many thanks. You didn’t cut yourself, did you?”
Rory looked down at his gloved hands and shrugged. Leo carefully picked up the shard. It slipped in place, filling the largest gap.
Maybe he wouldn’t need aluminum alloy after all. Which was good. He’d have had to leave Rory here guarding their work to go find some, and…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Leo
“Eh, maybe.” He looked up, eyebrows bunching together. “Except the plan is to get everything to fit perfectly together. So, maybe.”
He settled another piece in place. One tile was coming together quite nicely.
“I’d think of it more like fitting a bomb shell with it’s cordinants. All the bits have to be just so, or your…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Leo
“Good question.” He sat back on his heels and reached for another broken piece. “I think it’s some sort of game, or at least that’s what a friend of mine said. You have a picture that’s been cut up into a lot of pieces, and you have to put the pieces together to see the full picture. Or something like that.”
He rearranged…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Ooooh, you’re cruel. Tossing that out there like that after I’ve already fallen for this character and everything. *Turns my glare on you*
XD
Leo
The two tiles had broken up, pieces scattered across the hallway. Leo knelt to pick up a piece. It’s edge was rough, sharp enough to cut skin. Porcelain then. Although it had been…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 1 month ago
Oh gracious. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Oooof…no…*glared at Wyoh*
I’ll probably zip them off somewhere to *ahem* illustrate Leoron’s interesting fixing methods.
Rory is not fine, he has broken ribs and a cracked knee, and no you don’t build immunity to broken bones. XD -
Koshka replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 1 month ago
Well…
Since you’re helping out with the Susan story, you saw how I typically plot, and um…I’m almost done with his plot diagram…so now actual scene writing is supposed to start…
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Oh yes. The Button. XD
(I think It’s your turn? But I can go ahead and just scoot them off to some new assignment if you want.)
Or….. I could call the agents back and have them deal with him…….
or you could bring in a rebel captain to look over the place. Say they’ve driven the agents out of the school for a time.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 1 month ago
Yay! Thank you. They will now be highlighted on my playlist sheet.
(I’m actually considering having him play a type of guitar. Like, just a random thing to throw into his character. It’s so different from the aesthetic of the book [space outlaws and warring gangs aren’t very “calm guitar”ish], but he just seems like the kind of…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 1 month ago
Yay! Was there a song that really seemed to fit him? I trying to find one that’s his theme song, XD
(Also, the Sounds of Power music is thanks to my brother for sharing with me)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 1 month ago
Thought you might be interested. Here’s the playlist I randomly decided to compile for Leo’s story (CotR)
Instrumental – aesthetic music
From “Sounds of Power” Epic instrumental
- “Faith”
- “The Key”
- “Got Fight”
- “Courage”
From Emily Black’s “Cloak of the Light” sound track
- “The Fine Art of Sarcasm”
- “Chicago”
- “Be…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint thank you! I don’t draw mecha dragons much, but when I do I like to put detail into them.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
-be me
-be listening to the Portal 2 soundtrack cause I get into a phase of wanting to do that every so often (still haven’t played the game itself though, despite the fact that like 3 people have recommended it to me, cause I’m not sure if my computer will like me if I download another game)
-have a drawing idea

-D R A G O N W H E A T L E…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 whoa, the fact that Lilitu just killed the man responsible for his current situation is crazy!! Even if he doesn’t know that.
It’s also a good message–revenge isn’t the best option. Killing Kratos just made Lilitu feel worse.
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Esther posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009
Hey girl! Just been thinking about you lately. How are you doing?? 🩷 - Load More

@esther-c
HI ESTHER!!!
How are you doing?
Sorry I haven’t been active lately, I’ve ben soooo busy!
I’ve been working on my WIP when I can and I have a few new chapters!
I know I don’t comment on your Worth All the World page but I do read it when you tag me so please keep tagging me! I love your writing, I love all the highschool drama lol XD…[Read more]
Hiiii! <33
I’m doing pretty good! A little busy because I’ve been prioritizing things like school, family, and rest(!) lately, but it’s been good. 🙂
Good!! Yes! I saw those, and I’mma read them as soon as I get the chance.
No worries! I’m so glad you’ve been enjoying it; it means a lot. 😊
Oh so fun!! I’m about to get a job at a coffee shop t…[Read more]