Felicity

@euodia-vision

He smirked, picturing himself taking out a pathetic twelve-year-old with a foam ball.

Yeah, not that bad at all.

Oh my word, this made me crack up. 😂 Like, his mindset is terrible but also hilarious. XD XD

Derek

“Erebus,” the boy introduced himself. He nodded towards Derek’s books. “Where you headed Derek, nerd class?”…[Read more]

@smiley

Callista

A girl walked up to Callista with a smile. “Hey, you’re like the first girl I’ve seen in this school.” She laughed. “I’m Evelyn.”

Callie smiled and twirled the ends of her hair around her finger. “It’s nice to meet you, Evelyn. I’m Callista. And I promise I’m not the only girl in the school.” She chuckled and looked aro…[Read more]

@smiley

Ev

“I’m better now,” Falon said. “Do you want to continue our fight or are you too scared?” She grinned.

Ev stood up. “Me? Scared?” He waved a hand through the air and scoffed. “Never!” He picked up a ball and threw it at her again as she ran to grab one.

But before she threw, another ball came from behind and hit him just below his he…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @smiley @anyone-else-in-art-class

Lukas

Lukas filed out of the classroom with Fynn and Callista. When they exited, they found a place in the hall to stop and figure out where everyone was going.

“I have to go to art next,” Lukas said.

“Oh, that’s my next class too,” Callie said, looking up from h…[Read more]

@smiley Callista is in art too

@freedomwriter76

Somehow I missed this yesterday. Oh well. XD

Ami

Amidala breathed a sigh of relief as she and Clint left Derek behind them.

“Sorry about lying,” Clint said, sighing. “I just didn’t like that guy already. No way I’d let him take you to a dance.”

“Thanks so much,” Ami replied with a grateful smile. “I don’t like him either.” H…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

Yes for sure!! 🥰

@euodia-vision

Ohhhhh, ok. Man, I really thought that 1 was a truth. XD

@sarafini

Hm…

Let’s see here…

Jessica — 3

Kyle — 1

Alec —3

(Agh! It was so hard to choose! XD)

@kathleenramm

100%. Really great point. Being original just for the sake of being original, is missing the whole point of creativity.

What you pointed out about cliches is also a great point. I don’t think cliches or tropes are inherently bad, however they are more than not by-products of an author who lacks creativity. And its the absence of c…

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@kathleenramm

I love these kinds of conversations😊

I guess the whole concept of Mormonism is hard for me to grasp because it just doesn’t make sense to me on a fundamental level. God sent His beloved son to share the gospel and bring hope, salvation, and healing to the world. His story and teachings were eventually compiled into the Bible, a…

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@whalekeeper u on?

@whalekeeper

heh…it’s not going too well rn? (I can check out my HELP! Post… XD)

also as for titles overall I’m just referring to the series as The Destined Series, or The Destined.

the individual books I refer to as Projects.

Its either Projects and then the first letter of an object that represents the book, or the initials of a st…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76

I AM HERE!!

Paxton

Paxton watched as Reuben and Dietrich took their seats a few feet back behind he and Marcel. Paxton gave a small smile and a shy wave.

Dietrich rubbed the back of his neck, smiling demurely. Reuben waved.

Paxton didn’t really know either of them very well…

But he knew Reuben was Wol…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Lol the story embers books 😂 I see… you’re a part of both forums? XD

@kathleenramn

I totally agree. And personally, I don’t think a series should ever be unless it was originally planned to be one. If you plan on just doing one, like you said it might not be as bright and ecxiting afterwards. And if it’s l=not, I say move on to one of the many other ideas that have been on the backburner! Series are always better…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh! Yeah I think I do want to join! What would be a good group…? maybe a group without ten different characters lol

Yeah! That’s really cool. KP is a lot like that for me, much smaller and slower pace though. I love getting feedback and I want to get better at giving it. I love feeling a little bit like a big sister interested in young writers’ works, the way I wish I had a big sister involved in my early writing.

@smiley

Thanks!! 😄

I know, I just love all my ships so much. XD 🥰

Also, if you want to rewrite, save all of your old book and start again. Then you can take pieces from your old book and put new in, I find that the easiest. Or you could add new parts to your old book!

@godlyfantasy12

I felt that same way, I just could not write anything that seemed good in my book and everything I wrote seemed dumb or boring (Im just writing one book, not a series) So I got a bit mad and to stay motivated I started to write right in the middle, where I wanted to start because I just knew what was going to happen. Then from…[Read more]