Felicity

OHMGOSH 🤣 I WILL NOW BE IMAGINING THE TEACHER LIKE THIS XD

HI EVERYONE!!!!

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SO….I have some more Project DM characters to share. If y’all would like to tell me what u think/offer suggestions or just ur opinions?

thanks for all of ur thoughts/compliments!

And yea…Ik it’s kinda dark XD that is kinda what I’m going for, but I do hope to add levity/lightness to it, but this book does h…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @euodia-vision @janellebelovedpig @hybridlore @livingwoodchronicles @esther-c

I have a new blog post on my blog acancello.blogspot.com if anyone was interested. It’s about soap making and I hope you like it!

@esther-c

Sorry im a little late but GOOD JOB!! That is so amazing that you have gotten that far!🎉💗

I think we’re all guilty of it sometimes…

@hybridlore ha ha, yep it happened to me a few days ago.

@HighScribeOfAetherium lol…..

This is completely random…..

but I wanted to know if anyone else does this.

Do any of you look for one reference image/quote but end up wasting like 30 minutes reading memes instead?

(too lazy to tag anyone lol)

@keilah-h

Thanks!

Yeah Ik it’s a little weird 😂 XD

@mineralizedwritings oh, ok cool!

It’s not like I don’t like it. I think it’s cool how you’re effectively switching between first and third person. I just wanted to point that out.

@keilah-h

Idk if you see what I mean, but it has a really different emotional impact then the straight text. And I agree that consistency will definitely help it flow smoother.

@calyhuge lol yeah, kinda like that……

that’s too funny

@keilah-h

Lol it is a little confusing! Here’s a picture of where the inspiration from that comes from. (Manga, reads right to left). There’s the large boxes of narration and then the dialogue from the scenes… it’s one of those things that doesn’t translate into words but works great when drawn out. This is from haikyuu btw, great series but…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 ok! that’s fine with me.

@esther-c awesome!!!

@freedomwriter76 wow!

His wife died? That’s so sad!!

@mineralizedwritings Nice!

One thing: I like how you alternate between the character’s thoughts and the scene around him, but it’s probably a good idea to be consistent about that throughout the whole book, y’know what I mean? Like, don’t have that be the only long thought train in the book, otherwise your readers will be like “whaa? why is this…[Read more]

@hybridlore you’re welcome!

With the weird nose and everything, lol.