Felicity

Now, this is not my design, this is someone else’s, but look how long the toes are. A bipedal creature which has talons typically has to have large ones to balance out his weight, so he doesn’t fall over.

Also you’re totally fine. You’re not the one being difficult, I am. Lol

@grcr maybe I could just show you their size? Like drawing it?

i am sorry that I am probably flooding you with info on how to make my characters look perfect heh

All right, I got it:

You have him walking like a human on his tiptoes. Such a creature would probably…..fall over now that I look at it lol

His toes are long, more like a reptile’s. A velociraptor’s is a good stand in. Just replace the big claw with two more toes.

That looks great!

One thing on the talons–you said you’re not a fan of how they turned out. Just make them longer. I’ll show you a picture when I’m done with some online tutoring.

Also make the lines on his face a little less obvious. He is still fairly young. (Maybe I should’ve gone for a picture where his face is less snarly lol) He…[Read more]

@grcr awesome thanks!

also, do you mind if I post it other places/send it to my friends once you’re finished? I will make sure to credit you somehow and make it obvious that it’s not my art. But if you’re not comfortable with that, that’s totally okay.

@grcr thanks!

@savannah_grace2009

Ok thank you!!

I was thinking there needed to be more family interaction too. I’m glad you caught that. Is there a certain spot on the book that you think those types of scenes would fit best? (If not, that’s fine)

Ok yes!! I will for sure do that! It will be fun for me to take time to flesh out the characters individually…[Read more]

There are three toes instead of four here, but this is a decent approximation of him:

i gotta find a better clothes/tail and talons one, be right back

do I have more screenshots of him on my gallery than I should? probably.

the “he’s really good at killing” angle lol

All right, I got images:

not his usual clothes but here’s some face detail

@loopylin thank you!! glad you enjoyed it.

@grcr Why not then:

Name: Mick Lawrence Mundy

Age: 30, but he is a little more rugged than most cause he’s an outdoors kinda guy.

Personality: Very much a tough guy and a loner, most of the time at least. (His bio page on the site for the game I pulled him from says this: “In his former life as a tracker of dangerous game in the u…[Read more]

@rae

Why do I feel like Sniper would like cheesecake? XD. I don’t know, I can just picture him denying that he enjoys it.

AHAHAHA This is canon now.

it’s just be like this:

Scout, looking at the food on the table: I could’ve sworn I set out more slices of cheesecake.

Huntress: Since it wasn’t me, I’d blame Sniper.

Sniper: W…

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@grcr @savannah_grace2009

Thank you girls so much for reading through my book and supporting me!! 💕💕 I so so so appreciate you! ❤️

Your comments have given me a lot more confidence in the plot and characters, which I definitely needed going into a third draft.

Are there any scenes you’d like to see added? Or characters you’d like to see mor…[Read more]

Once you’re done with that one, I have a completely different pair of characters I wanna see in your style too, but if someone else wants their character drawn I’ll let them have a turn first.

and here’s a model of her I put together:

The little snake is just there for fun. You don’t have to draw him (unless you want to)