@felicity
Active 3 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, we did it by one person!
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Were there! I guess we need 13….
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@jonas I’m going to assume the forest dragon is more powerful than his companion, so who knows, maybe we will need all three to fight them off!
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Almost there guyssss
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m here……lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
oh, and that’s cool.
Looks like the Time Stone from Marvel lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@rae fair point.
still, I feel like we’re building up to that point. I know from experience that having too many “underdog” moments ruins what would otherwise be a good story. When Black Sky finally attacks, that will certainly be like Sauron’s forces or the Empire appearing. If we’re going to have this moment be an “oh no we’re outnumbered and…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I mean…it depends on what you mean by the inciting incident….I’m new to plotting XD In a way, Neveah being pregnant is the inciting incident, because it triggers a chain reaction that basically turns Sef’s world upside-down. If that makes sense. I’m not sure about if it is the inciting incident or not….but it is definitely so…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
oooh and I like the stone pic!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@rae Yep, but three dragons and only Nahim and Snake to fight them while they and the others are under attack still seems a bit unfair…..
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’ll be here in a little bit too!
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Ack, Mom just said dinner when were ready so I might not be on at 5
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, we eat really early.😅
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Were already so close!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@jonas good idea, have it come with one dragon though, because two (not counting the stone guardian) I think is a bit much for Snake, even with his powers, and I don’t really want another dragon to be attacking the heroes while the villains are doing the same.
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Dis is gonna be a breeze 😎
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
You’re not the only one! We eat at 5 too, lol.
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Im also EST and 5 is usually around our dinner time. Hopefully I can make it…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Half an hour!
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Allison posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
“Hey Dad, will you buy me a flame thrower?
Of course not. Don’t be silly.
Even if I didn’t use it in the house?”
― Watterson Bill, Calvin and Hobbes - Load More

Hey!! How does it feel to be done with your NOVEL????
Great! A little bit weird though, I have been doing it for nearly a year. Now I’m just rewriting scenes I dont like, filling in the blanks which is really fun! Hows your writing?
My writing’s going pretty good, I’ve been doing some major work on the first couple chapters, just making the prose better and making descriptions more vivid…I just really love that first chapter (the one I shared on the Chat Chat) for some reason…XD
I do to! Its so realistic and sweet.
If you want to, I really dont know what to think of this scene I wrote. I feel like I can do more with it, any points would be appreciated 😀
(I warn you, Its a little tense)
All the air seemed to drain out of my lungs. My limbs went limp with fear and I could barely register the clouds and dark sky that were around me.
This was it, this was…[Read more]
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