@felicity
Active 7 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 7 hours ago
Characters:
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
I liked pretty much all of the main cast.
~ Were there any characters that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?
Not that I remember. If there were, they weren’t important enough to the story to be a big…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 5 days, 8 hours ago
@grcr you’re welcome! you have great art!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 8 hours ago
ohhhh okay! Hmmm, would the Emperor be particularly happy with that? Like I know he probably was a follower of the pagan gods and wouldn’t like the true God in his son’s life, but I feel like he’d at least be upset that his only heir is dead.
Could also have it like in Daniel, with Darius and the sneaky advisors, where he kinda…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 5 days, 8 hours ago
That’s really cool.
I know it would be a ton of work, but it’s beautiful. If you do get a comic book published, I’d buy it.
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Koshka replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 5 days, 9 hours ago
That looks so good! And like a ton of work. Wow.
So would the book open to the left? Is that a normal thing for comic books (*has no clue since current comic expirence is nearly non-existent*)?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 5 days, 9 hours ago
@rae haha that’s cute!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 9 hours ago
@ellette-giselle What an ending!!! I hope we’re getting the next book soon.
Although, one question. Was the Christian prince the only one? Who’s gonna inherit the throne when the Emperor dies now? (Don’t tell me the priests have tried to make it so one of them will get it.)
Never assume anyone is dead until you have seen the…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 5 days, 9 hours ago
@grcr man I’ll never be able to get used to right to left reading lol
the art is great though!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 9 hours ago
@whalekeeper that’s cool!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 6 days, 4 hours ago
@rae that’s awesome!
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 6 days, 5 hours ago
Oh good gravy, yes… that’s way too true. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 5 hours ago
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Koshka replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 7 hours ago
Hmm. I can see we have some doctinal differences here. XD
While I believe that differences between male and female should be preserved (skirt girl speaking), and that there is a Biblical flow of authority that shouldn’t be messed with, I also believe that women are called to be apostles, prophets, evangelists, pastors, and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 8 hours ago
@ellette-giselle exactly.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Group Art Challenges! in the forum Art 6 days, 8 hours ago
@rae ooh yes, I like cats!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 9 hours ago
@ellette-giselle yikes!
That bit with the thorn was really cool.
 “How you do this will differ for each of you. The women are not called to fight in the streets as the men are, but they are called to fight in the home, working side by side with their husbands to raise up the next generations of warriors for Christ. You are called to this fi…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Group Art Challenges! in the forum Art 6 days, 9 hours ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 10 hours ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week ago
@the_lost-journal yep! And then share your stories with people and ask them what they thought and if there’s anything they think can change. You don’t have to follow their suggestions if you think it’ll conflict with the story, but if several people are all giving you the same or similar feedback, it’s a good idea to at least check out why.
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