@felicity
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
I need to read Little House on the Prairie again. –you
First off, why? –Ellette
yeah that is a little random. It’s somebody’s memoirs and doesn’t seem to have anything to do with your story……
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 month ago
thank you for posting and thus distracting me from wasting time on random TF2 art blogs and gawking at how cool other people’s tenth class ideas arebut yeah, anyway. I recently decided having ten classes kinda throws off the divisible by three thing the original nine had, so I was like “WELP, TIME TO MAKE TWO MORE FANCLASSES” lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 month ago
@theshadow I knowwwww
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@esther-c yeah same. That happened to me once. The main character of my current WIP has the same name pronunciation as one of my cousins (different spelling though)
Fortunately I haven’t interacted with this cousin in like a decade so I don’t think she’ll be too offended about a name similar to hers being used for a character if she ever finds out.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint wow!!
also, I’m not sure if you’re referring to Alan or Rour, but I think neither of them went too far. They both are wrong about something and think they’re right, and as such it’s messing with their minds.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@mineralizedwritings Just something I pulled off Planet Minecraft (a pretty reputable mod website)
It’s got the nine characters from a shooter game I like, and they hunt mobs for me. (They also have a penchant for randomly insulting them……lol)
I also have the Halo texture pack on.
ahaha the bundle update? I haven’t used them yet! Gonna…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Leo
“I know.” Footsteps in the distance clicked faintly in his ears. A buzzing radio signal flared nearby. The security team no doubt. Leo looked at Rory, eyes narrowing. “You ever climbed a brick wall?”
He took the Kid’s wide eyes as an answer. Leo leaning against a classroom door as he fished around for the master key. Two…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
For all you ladies on here, there’s an online camp that runs every few months, set up sort of like our little kingdom here to help encourage writers and help them reach a goal. Before camp you’ll set a goal for yourself (writing ## chapters/scenes/blog posts/words/etc.) and try to reach it in that month. You’re a part of a tent of about 10 or so…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hall of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Yayayayayayyyy!
I’ll definitely be posting on here this weekend!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Oooh, I like it!! I could definitely feel and experience what Jonathan was feeling and going through.
The only suggestion I would have would be to eliminate some of the passive voice (“The floor was sinking…” “…his brother was on his hands and knees…”). It will tighten up the prose and draw the reader in more.
But that’…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Thanks for reaching out, Kefa!! I’d love to chat some more!! 🤗
Hmm… my WIP…
Well, I have a few, but a couple of those have been put on the back burner for now. They were mostly ones written while I was trying to figure out my genre. Which, I’ve decided, is probably gonna be contemporary young adult fiction and histori…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Yeah, I mean, it’s really no big deal to me because they’re spelled slightly different (Halle and Hallie), and how they look and act is completely different so they’re very different people in my head. 🤷🏻♀️
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Your mc house looks cool! What mod is it?
Btw what do you think of the new update so far?
Oh also I got the first clone wars dvd at the thrift store! It’s only 3 episodes but it’s the first three and I like it so far.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Loved that snippet! I like how the reader is just as confused as Jonathan, I kinda felt like I was reading an anime lol.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@esther-c lol
My character names are usually pretty unique, but I often source them from people I know or other characters with similar names, and change a letter or two. Or I name them a word that relates to their personality or stick two words that sound good together (that works better for fantasy stories than modern or contemporary ones)
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Pov you just notice that you created a new character with a name that nobody you know irl has but literally meet someone with that name a few months later
😑😑
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle lolllll I think I saw that meme somewhere before
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle ohhh ok.
She looks great in that pose!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle ehhhh I have weird conversations here too.
Do you think Linus Smallprint has forgiven us for taking over his chat to discuss the finer points of being obsessed with a character?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle Emily’s cool. Who or what is she protecting with that gun?
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