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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
You could also do something from the perspective of lyen and gorb soldiers during the wars, maybe two members of the Faithful who don’t want to kill each other since they follow the same Savior. (idk if there are gorb Faithful but I would be surprised if there weren’t at least one or two)
Or have one of the other species hear of the lyens’…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@linus-smallrpint Is there a reason for that?
Cause I remember Oliver saying the gorb species was “savage” compared to the lyens, who from your reading seem to be pretty civilized. But I’m also not inclined to trust the lyens’ rating of an enemy’s civility, so.
But that makes me think. Maybe there should be other books set in this…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Why not bump Hans to twenty-one? So small a change shouldn’t mess up your plotting ect. but it looks like a new number. You do have a lot of ‘teens.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!
by the way, will we ever see more gorbs? I kinda miss your humorous Australian lizard people. (you somehow struck everything I like with that one lol)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@linus-smallprint I love that drawing of Tyn! She’s a good balance of humanoid and animal. I like it when authors do that.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Yessss…but they’re kinda vague and uncertain. And I don’t want to give you ideas if I’m wrong.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
That emoji really shouldn’t fit you in mad author mode as well as it does. XD
I see Jillian is having to play a Paul and straighten out churches through letters.
Still sorting out who’s going to die before the end of this book, so you’ve done well there.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Ohhh, they look so good!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
I know. It’s awful. XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
@koshka bruh
First off, that’s one quarter, not one third, second, why did they have to put “60 million” and “20 million” twice?
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Koshka replied to the topic What are some interesting things you've learned through story research? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 month ago
Some of these were more “research inspired by books” than research for books.
- Dead bodies can bleed at the mouth and nose if moved after the blood pools.
- Although black was a much sought after color of fabric in the middle ages, we don’t have many examples that survived to today, as the dyes used to make a solid black were…
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Oooooo, so are MC 2 and the villain related perhaps???
Love Alden’s boots. XD
Very intrigued indeed…
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Koshka replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
Sure!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint interesting! So his mother is probably trying to get him to use his magic. Why has she not gone more or less crazy like the other wizards yet? (Or has she and we just haven’t seen that yet.)
Why was she in the form of a crow instead of being half human? Did she use more magic than her husband and son or was it something else?…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@freed_and_redeemed that’s awesome!
where and when exactly would this take place? (I know it’s a fantasy world, but the names of your characters are making me curious as to which cultures they’re based off.)
@ellette-giselle I’m pretty sure that’s not her actual attire, so it’s not too big of a deal for me. That image looks more of a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month ago
well, I guess they’d probably use it as padding around the places where armor chafed or had a chance of knocking around (say, under the arms and thighs, and on the helmet and shins). Ancient soldiers used sponges to pad their armor. I’m not so sure what medieval ones used, but if they’d have discovered bubble wrap I’m sure they would’ve…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month ago
*Chokes on tea*
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