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@Sarah-h
Oh yeah, Valkyrie was a good one.
Who else finds themselves, after historical movies, always researching to see how accurate they were??

@Bluejay No, really, ignoring Lydia period. Right? Heh.
Obviously the story would not work without her, but she is a pain to watch.

Heh heh @Brandon-miller Dodge-brick… :p I mainly just like throwing the cat or riding in my pretty pink tractor. 😉
Glad you like my words. My thesaurus is still sitting here on my desk, that is, until I pick it up.

Heh heh @Brandon-miller Dodge-brick… :p I mainly just like throwing the cat or riding in my pretty pink tractor. 😉
Glad you like my words. My thesaurus is still sitting here on my desk.

Oh yes! That thing! Yeah, that was really helpful.

*grins* @Bluejay I know you were joking. 😉 *hugs you back*

Putting a brick on your head, eh? Interesting. I don’t care enough to try. 😀

Oh and @Brandon-Miller, I have no doubt Nebraska’s great too. 🙂

Hey @Bluejay! It’s not like I can help how tall I am! It’s only one or two inches’ difference, anyway, and I don’t lord it over her. 😛
And I have plenty of feelings, Tessa. Trust me. 😀

@Brandon-Miller
It was nice to be able to root for the main character and support his moral actions in a film without compromising my own!

*gasp* I know EXACTLY what you mean!!!

Oh, welcome to Kingdom Pen. 😀 The more comedians the better. Oh, and do you live in the Ohio midwest?

@Brandon-miller Have I established we’re crazy yet?

@daeus *bows* Why thank you. And yes, the ‘i’ does belong at the end, but if you want to add some ‘Daeus flare’ go ahead. 😉
And also, about my crazy words, incredamazing and fantasgreat belong to a few shows I’ve watched, so don’t give me all the credit. I just changed them up a bit. *evil grin* And also, we can just use any adjective we want to…[Read more]

😀 :p I figured that if other people stole bestestiest or whatever it is, then I can have my own word. Like we established, crazy.

@Brandon-miller
Howdy! Comedian, eh? Well, I’ll have you know that I’m a freelance comedian. (Not like Tim Hawkins, if anyone knows who he is. Anyone?) I just like to make people laugh. Things like that. 😀
@daeus is right. We’re all craaaaazzzyy! We come in all shapes and sizes too! I’m a dragon, others are unicorns, some are notorious for being…[Read more]

@Brandon-miller
Howdy! Comedian, eh? Well, I’ll have you know that I’m a freelance comedian. (Not like Tim Hawkins, if anyone knows who he is. Anyone?) I just like to make people laugh. Things like that. 😀
@daeus is right. We’re all craaaaazzzyy! We come in all shapes and sizes too! I’m a dragon, others are unicorns, some are notorious for being…[Read more]

Well, going back to read that part again, it does look more like she’s a child. 🙂 @Rolena-Hatfield

Heh. What they said, @Rolena-Hatfield. 😛
The story itself was engaging (and intriguing!!), but I noticed lots of structural issues, most noticeably past and present tense intermingled, and missing commas. Many words that could be switched around and/or changed for clearer meaning and smoother reading, too.

Also, the last sentence—I would say…[Read more]

@rolena-hatfield How harsh do you want me to be? *evil grin*
Ah, well. Only a few things. First off, when a new person starts speaking, it begins a new paragraph. Like this:
“Don’t tell me what to do, Johnny!” Bully Bob growled.
“I can’t give you my milk money, Bob.” the kid sniffled, “I just can’t.”
“Well, you’d better. Because otherwise…[Read more]

@rolena-hatefield How harsh do you want me to be? *evil grin*
Ah, well. Only a few things. First off, when a new person starts speaking, it begins a new paragraph. Like this:
“Don’t tell me what to do, Johnny!” Bully Bob growled.
“I can’t give you my milk money, Bob.” the kid sniffled, “I just can’t.”
“Well, you’d better. Because otherwise…[Read more]

<em@rolena-hatefield How harsh do you want me to be? *evil grin*
Ah, well. Only a few things. First off, when a new person starts speaking, it begins a new paragraph. Like this:
“Don’t tell me what to do, Johnny!” Bully Bob growled.
“I can’t give you my milk money, Bob.” the kid sniffled, “I just can’t.”
“Well, you’d better. Because otherwise…[Read more]

<em@rolena-hatefield How harsh do you want me to be? *evil grin*
Ah, well. Only a few things. First off, when a new person starts speaking, it begins a new paragraph. Like this:
“Don’t tell me what to do, Johnny!” Bully Bob growled.
“I can’t give you my milk money, Bob.” the kid sniffled, “I just can’t.”
“Well, you’d better. Because otherwise…[Read more]

<em@rolena-hatefield How harsh do you want me to be? *evil grin*
Ah, well. Only a few things. First off, when a new person starts speaking, it begins a new paragraph. Like this:
“Don’t tell me what to do, Johnny!” Bully Bob growled.
“I can’t give you my milk money, Bob.” the kid sniffled, “I just can’t.”
“Well, you’d better. Because otherwise…[Read more]