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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy I know that the plot definitely seems cliche now, and I’ve sensed that myself, so I’m trying to figure out a way to expand it so that it isn’t the same as the stories circulating through society nowadays. Not that that’s an easy thing to do… *sighs*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Done, and done, now to sit back and wait… @kate-flournoy
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
*coughs* Forgot to tag you @kate-flournoy
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Well, this is my first time posting any of my writing on here, so I may or may not have a valid reason to be nervous… @kate-flournoy
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Elizabeth started the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Prologue
I am Kara Cassidy, known to the prison guards as Elemental AG10567. Sometimes, I forget I have a real name, a human name. I’ve been in the prison for so long now that I forget there was a world before, when the Elementals didn’t exist and people didn’t go by their ID numbers.
In here, in the gray walls of this prison complex, it is ea…[Read more] -
Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Ugh, okay. Be right back… @kate-flournoy
Can you tell I’m not excited for this? Lol…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy @daeus @dragon-snapper @aratrea @ethryndal @f5a8c3e92 I’m playing with the idea of posting the prologue and first chapter of my WIP on here for some feedback… *cringes nervously* If anyone’s interested, just respond to this…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Every personality type has their strong points and their weaknesses, no worries. Figuring out which is which can be hard. @f5a8c3e92
That aside…your profile picture was actually the wallpaper on my phone for quite some time. I love it!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
Oh, that sounds like an amazing movie. I’ll have to watch it someday. @Moriahs
I’m afraid my movie horizons are in serious need of some broadening…I really only watch Marvel movies, or Star Wars… -
Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
I see what you did there… ;p
Be careful of my poor INFP feelings.. I’ve found that INTJ’s can rub me the wrong way sometimes–my mom is an INTJ, and goodness, can we get into it… @f5a8c3e92
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
@Moriahs I’ve never heard of that one. What’s it about?
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Elizabeth's profile was updated 9 years, 6 months ago
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Oh, the good ol’ days…
Bye! @dragon-snapper
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Goodness. What a bright, warm, lovely ray of sunshine you are… @f5a8c3e92
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Ah, yes, the shows that were around when I was little were the good ones. 😛
@daeus I’m signing out now. I wrote about 850 words, not much of it being dialogue, but I think it’s good action, so I’m happy with it. -
Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Oh my goodness, that brings back such good memories. I used to watch that show when I was a kid… I’m not sure my little sister would even know what it is. @dragon-snapper
I think I remember the episode you’re talking about. That was a cute show. -
Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
Hello, @Moriahs ! Welcome to KP.
I love photography as well, but all the pictures I take are off of my phone…
Erm, unique question that no one has asked you yet… *thinks very carefully* What’s your favorite movie?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Strangely, yes. I think there was one episode where Emily Elizabeth was throwing a party and her ‘friend’ wanted her to add more pizzazz, and she’d wiggle her fingers fancily whenever she’d say it, and as a little kid, that word stuck out as interesting. 😛
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
As in, the Big Red Dog? @dragon-snapper
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 I think of Clifford.
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