Faith Kindred

@Daeus Don’t I know it. 😉 Most elections, the ‘fate of the nation’ has been decided before it gets to us. We normally don’t matter. I just hope Cruz wins.

@Daeus Don’t I know it. 😉 Most elections, the ‘fate of the nation’ has been decided once it gets to us. We normally don’t matter. I just hope Cruz wins.

That’s great @hope. Apparently Indiana is “The Big State” now. I would have got to shake his hand except my family wasn’t able to make it to his rally. I’m looking forward to California too. That will be really interesting.

Yeah, this … it’s crazy this year.

My whole family is going to see Ted Cruz this coming Monday! And our primaries are on Tuesday! I’m excited about both those events. This election has been insane. It’s like a rollercoster of hopefulness…I think Cruz can win…no, he’s not doing well…yes, he’s doing well…no, Trump is doing better…it will probably go to convention…no,…[Read more]

Thanks, @Kate-flournoy and @Daeus. I’ll take care of those things.

@daeus I won’t be available to write tomorrow. Sorry. 🙁 We can do separate half hours if you want to. I’m all for it. 🙂

@rolena-hatfield are you around and about to do some writing? 🙂

@kate-flournoy Well, it’s actually going better than I would have expected. I should be done in about a week. I’m going for something kinda monumental though, so it’s going to need a lot of scrutiny.

@Hope Sounds pretty good. I would take out the “now” though in the first sentence. I think the drama’s great, but you might want to add a short little pithy down to earth sentence at the end just to tie it all together, make a call to action, etc.

Oh yes, I do know about that. It took me about a month to do my latest ending…

Hopefully it won’t be that severe for you. 😀

@Daeus

Ooops… Um, write this moment: All that remains of earth’s ravaged population is now living inside an enormous glass dome to protect itself from the hostile wasteland remaining. One day, a dusty handprint appears on the outside of the glass.

@Daeus

Ooops… Um, write this moment: All that remains of earth’s ravaged population is now living inside an enormous glass dome to protect itself from the hostile wasteland remaining. One day, a dusty handprint appears on the outside of the glass.

@kate-flournoy Woooaahh! Slow down there girl, I’ve still got two chapters more to go and a scene left in this one. It’s going kinda slow because it’s dealing with basically the culmination of everything, which is a little tricky as I’m sure you know. Who knows how many revisions this part will need.

@kate-flournoy It seemed pretty authentic overall. What’s you’re writing prompt by the way?

*sigh* @Hope

I need a flashing button on my keyboard that blares the words ‘DO NOT FORGET TAG’ at me every time I make a post.

@bluejay yay!! Seems pretty good to me… 😉

@kate-flournoy @daeus 708. A slow start as it is a new story, so I had some working out to do, but it began to move along as time went by.

@Daeus awesome. Finished the book yet?

I like it! 😀 Only thing I would look out for is adjectives in the first sentence— I am so one to talk, but thrilling and inspiring are pretty similar so I would cut one or the other.

@kate-flournoy @bluejay 662 words written. Fairly good for my rate.