Faith Kindred

Hey anybody, I’m off to write if you want to join me.

Yes @gretald, much better! 😀 I’m getting a lot more imagery this time around, not just a vague sense of what happened. Good work!

Ok, I jumped in. I’ll let you all know more about it when I’ve actually been on it a while.

Did my umbrella just break? Oh, no.

An archeologist…seven hundred and fifty years in the future. 😉

Hey guys. I just thought of Balaam and the talking donkey. The Lord made the donkey to talk of course though the donkey didn’t have a soul. 🙂 The Lord has pretty creative ways of getting people’s attention.

All right, @Daeus and @kate-flournoy. I’ve edited some. It’s still not quite done, but if you have time, would you mind reading it through? If you don’t have time, that’s perfectly fine.
@kate-flournoy, Is the showing vs. telling problem better? *looks hopeful*

The day of my thirteenth birthday I met my true love. I invited my entire…

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All right, @Daeus and @kate-flournoy. I’ve edited some. It’s still not quite done, but if you have time, would you mind reading it through? If you don’t have time, that’s perfectly fine.
@kate-flournoy, Is the showing vs. telling problem better? *looks hopeful*

The day of my thirteenth birthday I met my true love. I invited my entire…

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@Daeus oh! Now I get it— very clever. 😀

No, really.

My fault I didn’t get it at first. 😉 My head must be screwed on front-ways for once, making my brain very sluggish. *chuckles*

@Daeus oh! Now I get it— very clever. 😀

No, really.

My fault I didn’t get it. 😉 My head must be screwed on front-ways for once, making my brain very sluggish. *chuckles*

@kate-flournoy

dancing=cordination
blind=without thought
Ya ain’t got feet, you’re gonna trip and fall
So we use metres instead of feet (Brittish thing to do)
Meter=rythme – what you were talking about

Heh

Heh heh

humph

… yeah *groans*

@Daeus… what?

@Daeus what?

@kate-flournoy Quite neat. It’s like blind dancing, only without the feet.

We’re so Brittish we use meters instead.

I just realized we both switched meter in those last two verses… It’s neat how we do that without even realizing, isn’t it?

@Daeus

And then we have knightings,
And sparrings with words,
Though sometimes those sparrings
Grow rather absurd.

@bluejay get over here, we’re ruining your topic. 😀

@kate-flournoy

First we ate ice cream
Then cookies then candy
Now we eat mangos
Oh, boy! They are dandy

First we ate ice cream
Then cookies then candy
Now we eat mangos
Oh, boy! They are dandy

@Daeus

*urgggggghhhh* *facepalm*
Either you deliberately misconstrue my words, or my computer does.

No prizes for guessing which. 😉

‘I hammered into Google
‘Christian writing teens’;
It brought me to this awesome site—
The website of my dreams.

Excitedly I clicked the link,
And had a look around.
I eagerly perused the forum
And squealed at what…

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Mangos are perfect! I totally agree.