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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose Party-crashers are always welcome.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@emily Yes, the one I wrote the synopsis for. 😉 My goal is to finish the first draft by Christmas.
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Ingrid replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@shannon Gotcha. Thank you muchly, ma’am.
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Ingrid replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@emily Yeah, I wondered about those parts…thanks for the feedback!
@daughteroftheking *strokes chin* Perhaps, child, perhaps. 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
*flies in on a gravity-defying contraption not nearly as cool as @daughteroftheking‘s*
@emily I’m sort of working on my WIP while doing other things… 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
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Ingrid started the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Honestly, don’t laugh. I’ve never really tried this before (at least, I’ve never tried and succeeded before).
Kindly rip this synopsis apart and put it back together for me, will you? It’s for my WIP.
Fifteen-year-old Jaclyn Fallows’ life has been turned upside down—again.
She understands that much. Sure, she still doesn’t know why she…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Hey, @rachelle! Haven’t seen you around in a long time.
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose Thanks. 😀
I hope you don’t mind free publicity
*crickets* *crickets* What kind of question is that? 😛
Seriously, thanks though. It means a lot to hear you liked the characters because I struggled through a big characterization problem shortly before I wrote this story.
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Daeus replied to the topic Switching Between POVs in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
@supermonkey42 I don’t think it would be too confusing as long as the MC doesn’t know what other characters are thinking because…that would be creepy.
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Daeus replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@ethryndal Just thought I should add that How To Write A Sizzling Synopsis is a helpful book for writing a synopsis. You’ve probably heard me say that before, but what can I say.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper Noice. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Right here.
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@ingridrd Oooh, ice cream. This is the best book launch ever. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@Ethryndal definitely better. I love it just how it is, but as Daeus mentioned, you might cut out the first bit about her step-sister without any damage and probably with benefits.
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Daeus replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@ethryndal Like normal, I love the voice you use.
You might keep a long version like this for use on your blog, but if you’re going to use this on a sales page or book cover, yeah, it needs to be short.
You can probably make the point about her being heroine material shorter and cut out the part about her step-sister
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Ingrid replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@ethryndal *wiggles eyebrows* I wanna read it…although, I feel like I’ve just read the whole book. 😉 It is a tad too long, but that’s nothing a little editing can’t fix. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@sam-kowal I can see how it must be fun to have Stan as a dragon. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@Ethryndal your sneaking suspicion is absolutely correct, but otherwise this is absolutely brilliant.
Seriously, and I almost forgave it for being too long because all of it was awesome. So yeah. It’s good. *vigorous nodding*
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