Faith Kindred

@daeus Awesomesauce! Thanks for the great critique. What you mentioned about “the round about way” is a downfall in my writing and life. Mom says I flower everything up when it can just be stated plain and simple.
All the other suggestions were very helpful thank you. I’ll be using those when I go back through and make edits.

@ingridrd Thank…[Read more]

@Sarah-H yes, I loved that one! So heartwrenching… which probably explains why I loved it. 😛

Let’s see… I also really like Master and Commander, Horatio Hornblower, Little Dorrit, and Pirates of the Caribbean 1. I like the other Pirates movies as well, but none so well as the first.

Oh, the man who never was. As far as I know, the part they have in there about the german spy isn’t real, but I think everything else is pretty much spot on to what really happened, or at least really close. Amazing story.

@Rolena-Hatfield
Oh. My. Word. I LOVE THIS! Like everyone else has been saying, I want MORE! This is amazing. And…everyone else has already given all the feedback I would have given. 😉 Seriously, though, I love this. Keep writing for the Kingdom! 🙂

@brandon-miller The more you use them, the more you remember them. Honest XD

@jess I have to go now. I probably got 15 minutes or so in writing done. How’d you go?

@kate-flournoy Welcome to the club; people generally think Joy is older than me too. And they are always surprised when I tell them I’m 22. It’s quite fun, really. 😉

@jess I am writing a script at the moment, so I am with you, but I will be jumping in and out and then I will be heading outside.

@daeus Yipeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@kate-flournoy Hey, well when you find out what it was, ship some of it to me.
I corrected a couple small things from three of my chapters then did some beta reading for Tessa.

@Daeus I got 1,157… not sure what’s going on… 😛

@daeus It has, and unfortunately it’s going to be a bit more of a while as I have to go. Sorry I can’t stay longer. Maybe tomorrow. 🙂
Bye.

Hey! @bluejay It’s been a while.

Here. @daeus. @kate-flournoy. I’m writing a script, but I guess it still counts. 😉

@emma-flournoy I have heard that putting a brick on your head is a good way to start. Just kidding. *hugs you* I know it’s not your fault. I know you have feelings and I’m very glad you don’t lord it over her. *takes back comment about unfeeling little sisters*

@Daeus I’m in.

@dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy Writing tonight. Boy, I’m really glad to be doing this again. See you at nine if you’re joining.

@everyone There are some great movies being listed here. Narnia, The Inheritance, Seven Brides for Seven Brothers, Pride and Prejudice (ignoring Lydia every time she uses the Lord’s name in vain) Tangled and @hope Epic. I’ve have seen it. 😉

As for me, I have to cut the movies into categories:
2D animation: Bambi
3D animation: Tangled, Bolt, or…[Read more]

@kate-flournoy *breathes a sigh of relief* Hey, I know you are older. And I also know what it feels like to be shorter than people who are younger than you. I am the shortest kid in our family now. My two younger sisters have sprung above me. *wails* Why don’t little siblings have feelings? *glares at you @emma-flounroy* 🙁