Faith Kindred

@dekreel  *bows*

@that_writer_girl_99  How long is Evyn’s hair?

@dekreel  Here are Kevin and Phoebe!  *wipes brow*  Oh dear, it took me way too long to get her nose right…

@that_writer_girl_99  Oooooh….I want to draw Evyn…and possibly one of the boys.  They all sound like great characters! 😉

@dekreel  I’d like to try Kevin and possibly Phoebe… 🙂

@pickupyourpenandwrite That makes sense; I’ve been there as well in the past. Do you have a clear idea on what parts of your story you need to improve on?

@sleepwalkingmk Huh. I’m not seeing anything in spam, so I’m not sure what happened on that front. :/

Either way, I like the tension between the character’s plot and thematic goals there. I’m a bit unsure, however, from what you’ve said if your plot goal is really the plot goal of your story. It seems like the protagonist stops trying to achieve…[Read more]

Welcome to the forum, @pickupyourpenandwrite! Glad you joined us. 🙂 Great work in passing the 50,000 word mark with your latest novel! Do you have a revision plan in place yet for the work?

@emma-flournoy You know what, it’s no trouble. Have your own doc.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OAqB7pb5gPIiym4MdPWFI4vh6YuODlRFQjYcPPWUUpc/edit?usp=sharing

@pickupyourpenandwrite  Hey, friend!  Glad to have you aboard.  *salutes*

@jessi-rae  I’d like to read your story sometime!  And you’re welcome!  😉

@jessi-rae  Well…I found time.

And a little closer…

This look anything like her??

@jessi-rae  I might attempt her, if I find some time today.  🙂

@skredder  Aaannnnd now I have to go…ugh.  The story of my life.  Talk to you later!

@aislinn-mollisong and @skredder

If you two are still here, I have a couple minutes to spare.  🙂  Also doing some worldbuilding.

@warrenluther04 Posting fan fiction is fine so long as you label it fan fiction.

@emma-flournoy Sure. You can share Mallory’s doc if you want. 🙂

@mariposa  You, my dear, astonish me!!!  That is…wow.

@itisastarrynight I think one big thing that makes flashbacks seem cheesy is when the chapter before the flashback ends with something like, “he remembered the time thirteen years ago when blakedy blank blank…” If you can avoid that, it should really help.