@faithdk
Active 7 years, 5 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 8 months ago
@skredder I may try her today or tomorrow…maybe. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@warrioroftherealm *salutes* Awesome!
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@christianna-hellwig @rochellaine @emma-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99
Thanks so much for your suggestions, everyone! Here’s what I have now.
“Oh, stars that remember the firstthings forgotten
How earth and its peoples were early begotten
They looked and beheld through a pane of dark glass
The earth in a swirling, untamable mass
From darkness f…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@christianna-hellwig Thanks so much! I’ll take a look over this as soon as I get a chance.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 8 months ago
Whoops @introvert_girl
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel Oh okay! Hmmm…I’m not sure that sounds very feminine.
@introvert-girl Persephone!!!! YAS. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@emma-flournoy Ha! Well, we’ll see. I’d certainly love to.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Ha. Those are literally the story of my life. 😂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writing Inspiration in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@hannah-c Boy, do I need this reminder sometimes. 🙂 To be honest, I’m at a weird stage in my writing career. I’m struggling to find time to write *coughschoolcough*, but I want to write so bad. All. The. Time. And that just doesn’t work when life is so busy. *sighs*
I guess I need to start making time to write because I don’t want my…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel Is your character a girl?
All I can think of are names like Peregrine (for a boy), Parrianne and Perris (those aren’t that good, I know). 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@emma-flournoy Sure, here’s one. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oV9qnLtpy4Cwn8-JFfJaXzOn4A5-yqRBR-AqlFIyYdk/edit?usp=sharing
Yeah, song creation and all that. I probably should have come up with something more original, but in my defense the song creation is the basis for the whole magical system, the last book’s allegorical aspects, and the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @rochellaine Thanks. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 More for metric pattern, but either one.
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Daeus started the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi KeePers,
Any of you who write structured poetry, I could use a bit of help with a poem I’ve written. This is for the fantasy novel I’m writing and essentially recounts the first events of the world.
My problem is that I know a few spots have clunky meter. I generally have a good ear for meter and maybe I could fix this by myself, but…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Unlikable Protagonist? in the forum Characters 8 years, 8 months ago
@introvert_girl Sam really said it already, but you can also add a backstory to show why the character acts the way they do. The overall tone of the story will help too. I think though that the most important thing is proactivity, like Sam said.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Why do you write? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
I write for two reasons. 1) Because I believe the Lord can work through words and that the words we speak and write have power. 2) I write because I have to. What else would I do with all these insane, lovely ideas swirling around in this head of mine? Not that ideas are a burden buuut…*glares at all my WIP…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@dragon-snapper First of all, nice example. 🙂
I don’t think that it’s too dismal by itself. Even a lot of that can be good. It creates tension, you know.
It just takes a little bit of hope to keep the reader on the right track. Simple things too. Depression works because it pretends to be immense. Little, pleasurable, “childish” (quote on…[Read more]
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Julia R. replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 I agree that there definitely should be some sort of international Kingdom Pen day. I don’t know how exactly one would go about celebrating it but holidays are great.
@that_writer_girl_99 congratulations on your almost anniversary!!! Kingdom Pen is a wonderful place for learning and sharing, I wish I remembered it more often when I’m…[Read more]
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Julia R. posted an update 8 years, 8 months ago
Okay so I have returned after a very long hiatus, and first off, the new website design looks great!
Second; what does it mean by “rank?” My rank is “Wise Jester”, I’m not sure what that means, how on earth I obtained it, and whether or not I should be offended… - Load More

Welcome back, @julia-r!! 😀
Your rank shows how many posts you’ve made on the forum. The more posts you make, the higher your rank. Here a list:
Bumbling Henchman: 0-20 posts (I think)
Charismatic Rebel: 20-50 posts
Wise Jester: 50-100 posts
Loyal Sidekick: 100-300 posts
Knight in Shining Armor: 300-1000 posts
Eccentric Mentor: 1000-2000
Chosen…[Read more]
Aaah! I see now! I was starting to assume it had something to do with posts made as I moved about the website a little more, but I wasn’t sure. Those are such fun labels 😀 Thanks, @dekreel !