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Active 6 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 More for metric pattern, but either one.
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Daeus started the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hi KeePers,
Any of you who write structured poetry, I could use a bit of help with a poem I’ve written. This is for the fantasy novel I’m writing and essentially recounts the first events of the world.
My problem is that I know a few spots have clunky meter. I generally have a good ear for meter and maybe I could fix this by myself, but…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Unlikable Protagonist? in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
@introvert_girl Sam really said it already, but you can also add a backstory to show why the character acts the way they do. The overall tone of the story will help too. I think though that the most important thing is proactivity, like Sam said.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Why do you write? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I write for two reasons. 1) Because I believe the Lord can work through words and that the words we speak and write have power. 2) I write because I have to. What else would I do with all these insane, lovely ideas swirling around in this head of mine? Not that ideas are a burden buuut…*glares at all my WIP…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper First of all, nice example. 🙂
I don’t think that it’s too dismal by itself. Even a lot of that can be good. It creates tension, you know.
It just takes a little bit of hope to keep the reader on the right track. Simple things too. Depression works because it pretends to be immense. Little, pleasurable, “childish” (quote on…[Read more]
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Julia R. replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 I agree that there definitely should be some sort of international Kingdom Pen day. I don’t know how exactly one would go about celebrating it but holidays are great.
@that_writer_girl_99 congratulations on your almost anniversary!!! Kingdom Pen is a wonderful place for learning and sharing, I wish I remembered it more often when I’m…[Read more]
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Julia R. posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
Okay so I have returned after a very long hiatus, and first off, the new website design looks great!
Second; what does it mean by “rank?” My rank is “Wise Jester”, I’m not sure what that means, how on earth I obtained it, and whether or not I should be offended… -
Julia R. changed their profile picture 8 years, 2 months ago
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Julia R.'s profile was updated 8 years, 2 months ago
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Ingrid replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99Â *tackle hugs you*Â Love you to bits, my dear.
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper We’ll I think you’re the first to ever reveal their name after hiding it for a long time. It’s kinda funny too because Danielle has a really soft feel to it which…doesn’t exactly make me think of a dragon. lol. Don’t burn me with a ball of flame, please! I like the name. It starts with a Da, after all. What more could you ask for?
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Seems hard to believe it’s only been a year. Feels like you’ve been a part of this for much longer than that. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper *drops jaw* Did you just reveal your…actual name?
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Daeus replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@That_writer_girl_99 I’m feeling slightly sentimental like you’re leaving, but you’re celebrating the fact that you’re not leaving. I find that utterly fascinating. Write that down somewhere. Happiness can be sad.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow… has it really almost been a year? 😛 Time flies.
Hey, I happily take the credit for all those terrible (awesome) things if it means I helped you grow even the tiniest bit. Thank you. I’m glad. Keep going. 😉
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Facebook in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 2 months ago
Step #1: Post the FB page link here so we can follow you. 😀
Step #2: Make sure it’s linked on your blog, and possibly include a link to it in your welcome email sequence for new subscribers (assuming you have a mailing list).
Step #3: My personal approach has been to be posting writing or reading related statuses 4-5 days a week, and then as…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@ariella-newheart Accurate.
@dekreel Ok; not going to lie, that last pic of me kind of creeps me out…
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel *wild applause*
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Daeus replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper If the problem is just that your story seems too dismal, make sure there’s always an element of hope mixed in with the chaos and strive to focus on your characters’ yearnings/ambitions that drive them forward. If you’ve got that all down, I bout your story could be too dismal. Problems tend to intensify stories. It’s only stories…[Read more]
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Welcome back, @julia-r!! 😀
Your rank shows how many posts you’ve made on the forum. The more posts you make, the higher your rank. Here a list:
Bumbling Henchman: 0-20 posts (I think)
Charismatic Rebel: 20-50 posts
Wise Jester: 50-100 posts
Loyal Sidekick: 100-300 posts
Knight in Shining Armor: 300-1000 posts
Eccentric Mentor: 1000-2000
Chosen…[Read more]
Aaah! I see now! I was starting to assume it had something to do with posts made as I moved about the website a little more, but I wasn’t sure. Those are such fun labels 😀 Thanks, @dekreel !