Faith Kindred

@That_Writer_Girl_99 *hysterical laughter* It was too good of an opportunity to pass up.

@Emma-Flournoy sneaky! XD I wasn’t ready yet…

@That_Writer_Girl_99 oooh— cool flashback! I love it. *grins* Good job.

@Holly-Nelson-Gray yeah… what they said. 😉

This may be a somewhat random tangent of this topic, but I’ve found that a lot of times body language can be used to replace dialogue and automatically include more description. Instead of ‘Hey, why are you cleaning the fridge?’
‘Because it’s dirty and needs cleaning and I’m disgusted about it, that’s…[Read more]

@Holly-Nelson-Gray If you haven’t yet, check out our recently published articles on writing descriptions. I think once you have a full understanding of the potential of descriptions and dialogue, your brain will naturally sort out how to balance them.

Your problem probably isn’t so much that you have too much dialogue, but that you don’t have…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper @graciegirl Stopping a bit early. I edited about 2,100 words.

Back.

Have to go again. Be back in a min.

@dragon-snapper I’m back.

@dragon-snapper Just a moment. I’ll be back in 5.

@winter-rose @delightinlife @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @jess @audrey-caylin @dragon-snapper @graciegirl I’m writing till 9.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 welp, I am now. 😛 Did you have a question?

@Rachelle yes, some. Though mostly physical drawing… how much are those programs, do you know?

@Rachelle yes, some. Though mostly physical drawing… how much are those programs, do you know?

@mark-kamibaya
Thanks for the link to your blog! I like the set up. I’ll definitely have to come back and do some reading.

Philosophical musings and commentary on life. *addsthesetolistofblogtopics*
Also I’ll have to check out those other blogs you mentioned. Thanks!

@anne-of-lothlorien That’s awesome! 😀 I’ll pray that your aunt’s pregnancy goes well (as well as all the others). Hope the root canal isn’t terribly nerve-wracking!

@ethryndal No problem; continue working through it at your own pace. 🙂 How would you say scene one ties into your story’s theme, apart from setting up the other two scenes?