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ella started the topic The Journal (a poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 5 years, 9 months ago
Hey everyone! Here’s a poem I wrote. I wrote it really quickly, so it’s kinda rough here and there. I’d love y’all’s feedback/critiques though! (It’s kinda long, sry)
The Journal
One hundred Septembers ago,
he gave a small book to his dear.
“As you grow, it will too,
But only if you write every year.”
Ninety Septembers ago,
She found…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic What was the most difficult scene for you to write and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I know what you mean. That’s an interesting thought–I’ve never really paid attention to authors’ favoritism. I’ll have to think about it. I feel like I’ve read that kinda thing before though, and I’ve definitely written it!! 😂
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 9 months ago
@gracie-j Lying on my bed. A part of me wants to pick up around my room but it’s such a wreck. I’d probably need to do it piece by piece so I don’t get overwhelmed lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 9 months ago
@gracie-j I’m here. What’s up? I got a new desk and printer for Christmas! So excited. We’re gonna get everything set up in my room next week.
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Lin replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 9 months ago
@gracie-j I thought it was super sad ahh. Every time I flipped the page it just got worse and worse…but it was written really well and I enjoyed it a lot.
Merry Christmas to you as well!
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Lin replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 9 months ago
@gracie-j I just wanted to let you know I finally finished Gone With the Wind.
I-I can’t think right now. I’ll sort my thoughts out tomorrow ahhh.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 9 months ago
So I got Sally, my first beagle about 2 or 3 years back. Then we got Jack her companion, and they had pups! We kept 2 pups and got rid of dad, and then later got rid of one of the pups.
(my parents and brothers have 2 dogs. One is one of Sally’s babies)
So now I have 2 fur babies who I adore!! My sally and her Daughter (who was p…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 9 months ago
Haven’t really worked on it. Just been giving myself some time away because I haven’t felt like working on it and I know I’m gonna wanna hit the ground running in January.
And my beagles are good! That day I said we were bringing them in we had a scare with Sally, our first beagle (and momma to our other one Raven). She got a pie…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 9 months ago
@gracie-j I’m here but haven’t been doing any writing or editing. Holidays and all.
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ella replied to the topic What was the most difficult scene for you to write and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 9 months ago
Definitely. On a slightly different note, I hate it when people write comic relief characters who are so try-hard!! 😄 I almost put the book down (e.g. Uriah in the Divergent series–I liked him in the first book, but in the last two, he was super cringy) Anyways, it’s interesting to see how so many writers (most of the time) s…[Read more]
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Lin posted an update 5 years, 9 months ago
Hey, uh, I won a short story contest a few months ago if you want to read it…. https://www.writervana.com/post/october-2020-contest-winner
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ella replied to the topic What was the most difficult scene for you to write and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 9 months ago
I struggle with everything everyone else has mentioned, but I always have the hardest time trying to make friendly banter between two characters. Since I write in a different setting than real life, I can’t use the banter between me and my friends as inspiration. (It’s also mostly cheesy stuff anyways. 🙂 ) So yeah, I’ll be w…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic What was the most difficult scene for you to write and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 9 months ago
Yea I struggle with scenes that have multiple characters. Not even just with dialogue but overall, I struggle with not just randomly popping in things for them to do to remind u they’re there, but I also usually don’t feel like taking the time to write the scenes lol. Again, hopefully I’ll smooth it out in editing.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic What was the most difficult scene for you to write and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 9 months ago
That’s quite hard for me to answer! Death scenes are hard for me to write emotionally speaking, especially as someone who has had two very beloved family members die traumatically. It’s just hard for me to treat them as blase as I used to when I was a younger writer and I struggle with them quite a lot.
More mentally though, stupid…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Prologue Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I get it. Characters like that are hard, but I love to read and write them!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Prologue Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 9 months ago
@nova21 Yes I do kinda imagine her in that way. I need to definitely take a look at that more later probably, but I also think it’s hard for her to do so when actually speaking to The Destroyer.
But I definitely know where you’re coming from because that is how I’d like to depict her. She tries to remain very stoic on the outside, but when speak…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Prologue Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 9 months ago
This is great! The first sentence is amazing! 😃 Wonderful job!
If you wanted to, it might be interesting to make Corvina more stoic on the outside, but conflicted only on the inside. As a servant of the Destroyer, I would personally want to try to keep my feelings to myself, lol!! 😂
Thanks for sharing!! I hope you post more…[Read more]
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