Faith Q.

@whalekeeper I was just about to come on here and say…

A flaw is not a sin 😅

Sin- an immoral act considered to be a transgression against divine law.

Flaw- a mark, fault, or other imperfection that mars a substance or object.

@koshka…heh…yea 😅

so it is kinda…surreal and dark and mad?? But I actually really really like it 😂

it has a Tim burton Alice in wonderland feel to it lol, and just…I like it a lot.

Plus it really just speaks to me about Lyn and how she views things…I’m happy with it (needs editing obviously but yea!) really one of those HUZZAH! Moments!

&…

@whalekeeper AHHHH I LOVE THAT TIDBIT ABOUT ZOLTEN RELATING TO ARA’S INNER LEADERSHIP STRUGGLE!!! AHHHH!!!

@whalekeeper also…if what you’re saying is Active arcs are characters who basically say “I need to change everything about myself” (and they do that) IMO that would be a very negative arc/story.

Yes I understand people need to change…but that is through growth, not technically changing everything about themselves. Villains even have to grow t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Hm…I’m afraid I’d have to disagree with you there.

You say that this in-between character would at first appear to be active, but in reality be passive, because they have “No flaws” in the end they are just influenced by others, etc.

And I can see what you mean…but as a REAL human being who has been INFLUENCED by others (bec…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon NO!!! NOT J****!!! NOT THE BABE 😭

ALSO EVERYONE!! I was lying down and got hit with a small excerpt (not gonna share the exact excerpt cuz it needs editing and such lol)

but ya know how u get hit with bits and pieces of dialogue, etc? This was kinda like that, so I wrote it down.

Basically, I was thinking about this advice…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 RIKER!!!!!

WHEN DOES HE GET AWAY?!?! HOW DOES HE GET AWAY?!?! I NEED MORE!!! I NEED ANSWERS!!! *shakes Freedom by the shoulders*

@highscribeofaetherium ahh thx!! I’m so glad u think so! That makes me feel so great

However…the Light One (God) is always watching over Ara and her friends…

As well as His Guardians (Type and shadow of angels)

in fact I MIGHT (not sure) have the gang meet some or a guardian along their journey.

Maybe even the Guardian that Ara considers like a brother, named Ganesh.

No matter what, Ara and her friends are destined to…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium good question!
So essentially what happens is this (and I haven’t figured out ALL of the details)- Eder (type and shadows of Satan) is headed to A’Grend, to destroy it. Ara, sorta begrudgingly, tries to find out how to stop him, being led by her dreams/visions and a journal by her late grandmother.

She discovers her gra…[Read more]

@whalekeeper true, true (love having a brainstorm partner lol)

So…in this book, Ara is still struggling with past mistakes/decisions. She’s grown a lot since the first book (this is a series so there is growth in each book, wether it be good or bad growth) but nothing is fully gone yet. Now, though, she’s struggling mostly with the fact that…[Read more]

@whalekeeper oooh I like that! However…I like to think a lot of my charries fall under both umbrellas. Many of them are trying to survive the evil that’s been done to them, but they’re also having to overcome their own inner demons, sometimes heightened, or because of the evil that’s been done to them, make sense?

Where do those charact…[Read more]

OH AND MUSIC!!! Totally write down your favorite song or songs that make you think of whatever you’re creating! Honestly anything that inspires you about what you’re making-quotes, scriptures, music, pictures, unique words, etc.

@thesrcaneaxiom I LOVE THIS!!!! As a person who really loves templates, using templates (and then throwing them out and using new ones, and then repeating the process, creating my own, etc XD) this is so true!

I do love getting all of the basics down, and the more…technical aspects of it all down, where I can look at it and remember it all, or c…[Read more]

@whalekeeper ooh love those points!! I don’t have a blurb currently (I probably have old blurbs stored away on my computer, but the story has changed so much they probably aren’t quite as relevant? Though most of it remains the same.)

Essentially this is what happens-

This takes place a few weeks (or a month or so) after the events of the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper GAH MY HEART!!!!

so @everyone, I think I’m probably ready to move on to the next school day.

I’ll probably have it start, for Paxton, with him receiving a notification… the rest of y’all can do whatever but yea.

Who all is in our dorm again?

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c did @mineralizedwritings or someone else have a Charr…[Read more]

ROFL!!! I think at this point…my bully boys are just through…

I don’t even know what to RP as them now XD.

they will reconvene with their team later to make a better plan…for future situations, to take out people one by one. It’ll probably work for a while at least (consider the dark night of our story XD) but who knows with this crazy cro…[Read more]

@whalekeeper BAHAHAHAHA XD XD XD Seb has officially killed me. I’m ded. ROFL.

Aramis

“What the-?!” Aramis’ eyes widened. His face changed shape multiple times as he tried to grasp what he was staring at.

How…

What…?

“How did you get in here?!” He looked at the door…still shut and locked…hadn’t cracked open even an inch.

“I have my way…[Read more]

@whalekeeper YEAA MARCEL!!’ GET HIM!!! Gah the poor baby 😭 Whaley I’m sorry…Edrich and Aramis are really…not good guys….

I know I’ve shown them as bullies obviously but this really didn’t show their evil side (especially Edrich’s…)

@everyone XD I don’t feel like tagging everybody…also…Pax might get hurt and…I feel bad tagging ppl because I kno…[Read more]