Faith

Some extra explanation in case that rp didn’t make sense: Benny is essentially a living drawing made of enchanted ink. He is entirely 2 dimensional and can travel anywhere across mostly flat surfaces. He can grow and shrink in size. He can’t talk or make noise, but he’s very expressive so people can typically understand him anyway. Except Fel.…[Read more]

@jonas Cool ok @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @raxforge @hybridlore @rae @grcr

Felicity

As Felicity listened to the stranger, some odd movement in the corner of her eye caught her attention.

A couple feet away from her stood a brick chimney. Drawn in dark ink on its wall, a two-dimensional cartoon rabbit was waving at her. He wore a pair of…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Yesss that book is the best. It’s designed so you can learn it by yourself without a teacher. I should probably pick it up again even though I’m not in school.

@jonas

I was thinking of adding two more characters and sending Felicity on a short rescue mission for one of them, but I’ve been delaying it. If I do that now, would that completely derail your plans? I can figure out a different way to introduce them if you’d rather

@savannah_grace2009

I think this is really good! You have some really nice prose.

The sensation made her want to scream, cry out in agony…

You don’t really need an ellipsis here. A period would work better.

“It’s those cursed Paynes,” Odessa muttered, anger flashing in her violet eyes.

This makes it sound like Kaden and Sevryn have tried to get…[Read more]

Dang, I miss taking Latin now

@whalekeeper

Just curious, what curriculum are you taking? Do you use the Familia Romana book?

@savannah_grace2009

I’m sorry you’re going through that. I’ll be praying for her and your family ❤️

Glad to hear that you had a good holiday despite it though

@whalekeeper Oh yeah I forgot about that! I haven’t listened to it

@whalekeeper

I’m a bit rusty, but the first line, since breaths is plural, should be “Spiritūs sunt videre difficilis”

I’m not sure about the second line because the vocabulary is unfamiliar, but it seems off. Just make sure the verb is in the imperative case. I can’t tell if it is or not.

Also, I think “ramos” needs to be “ramōs”.

Real…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Awwww they’re so perfect in your art style <3

@savannah_grace2009

Oh no why was it sad?

@savannah_grace2009

Hi, good to see you! How was your thanksgiving?

@godlyfantasy12 YOU’RE ALIVE

We missed you!

@highscribeofaetherium

That’s so cute! I wonder what kind of adventure the little fox is on. I love the scenery and the cute cartoony style! 💕

@whalekeeper

oh I really like that idea. Two of my favorite things combined plus a little conflict <33

I would have to turn Lucky into some kind of alien, though.

@otherworldlyhistorian

Thanks! That is really helpful.

I guess in that case, I think my two main characters are actually antagonists to each other, maybe. They have opposite character arcs/ fatal flaws and kinda end up meeting in the middle at the end.

My other WIPs also need villains so I’ll probably be referencing this again.

@ellette-giselle

Yw!

It looks a little ‘messy’ in the way most signatures do, but it’s not ‘sloppy’ and it’s nice and even.

@whalekeeper

Thanks!

@ellette-giselle

Oh wow, that looks really nice! I love the wreath of branches.

(your signature [on the drawing, not your forum signature] looks very pretty and neat, btw. I wish I could do mine that nice :p)

@the_lost-journal

Magic potato, havoc potato, what potato am I? :]